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Instead we saw one of the bears or my favorite name for them is still grannies. 

"Hi guys. I hope you feel like kings in our beloved castle." This better will be my best friend. Hopefully Timothy and the alpha granny will tolerate each other so I can be friends with blondie. 

When none of us answered he started laughing: " I see no big fans, am I right? But we'll see, when we know eachother better, maybe you could be my gay friend." He smirked. Why is this dude so funny? But still we had to find Brimm. 

Why did we forget about Brimm? What lousy best friends are we? The guilt hit me hard. I saw to Timothy and knew he felt the same. That was the reason he did not argue with blondie and I think if he could he searched for Brimm without us. But what are with the grannys and Brimm's Mom? Will they come with us or will they mind their own business? Questions over questions...


Hi guys, 

I hope you read the story with the same joy I had writing it. But I ould use some feedback because I am insecure abot the story. Someone said it is confusing and so on. Do you feel the same?

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