This is my first book so I'm going to come back and edit it a lot. Like a lot, it's only published so I can get some feedback.
Cover by: @-queenpuff https://my.w.tt/VHvfxgp8B0
THIS STORY IS IN MAJOR EDITING. IT IS SUSCEPTIBLE TO PLOT CHANGES.
feel free to criticize and share idea's.
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I've rewritten the first chapter and have begun the second chapter sorry if theres any confusion.
plot points that changed: (SPOILERS) ....the mother and fathers death will change though they'll still be dead, the shifters having 4 eyes will change but they'll still only be able to see unless in human form. Dmitri will no longer live in Michigan, his location will be unspecified instead. the idea that Dmitri will only have seen 2 shifters will change, he will instead encounter them quite often. There might be more changes but I cant remember.
other then that the only other thing that will change is my writing, i'm going to try to be more descriptive, and Show rather then Tell. I realize a lot of people prefer feeling whats going on rather then just reading it.
And one last thing, these amazing people: McKraven and Measuredmarlin5
Have helped me a lot with the first chapters, the story definitely wouldn't be as good if it weren't for these guys.
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Bone And Blood
Научная фантастикаThe world is over run by vicious creatures known as shifters. They can take human form at any time but prefer their true form at night. They rip through every human they see leaving only the bone and blood of their victim. Dmitri Hale has lost every...
