The Kid in the Back

What's Next?

Hello everyone. So I've been giving this book a lot of thought and after re-reading it many times I've decided to not continue with it. My writing skills have improved drastically over the years and I've been writing another Hawaii Five-0 story that'd I'd like to publish on here!

The new story revolves mainly around Steve and his family. He has 3 children, all from Catherine, and is dating Lynn. Chin and Kono are not in it but Tani and Junior are. Adam, Kamekona, Grover and his family, and Danno and his family are all in it as well as some new characters I added.

This new story is much like this one because it deals with a lot of personal/family drama. There is some workplace action as well but I'm really not the best at writing about police work.

For those who want a sneak peak continue reading, anyone else who's interested can expect the first chapter within the next couple days!

SNEAK PEAK #1:
Steve's 3 children are ages 13,14, and 17. The youngest(13) is named Carson John McGarrett, his middle name given to him after his grandfather(Steve's dad of course). The middle child(14) is named Kelsey Ann McGarrett, sharing the same middle name as her Aunt Mary. And the eldest(17) is named Austin James McGarrett, also short for AJ, who shares his middle name with his father Steve.

SNEAK PEAK #2:
These children have already been through a lot when you first meet them in the story but it's not like anything to come. There will be people getting shot. There will be heart break. There will be broken bones. There will be not so wanted reconnections with family. There will be nights in the hospital. There will be Danno stepping in as the occasional dad #2. There will be drunk people. There will be love... maybe some intense love if you catch my vibe. (Not PG-13 lol) There will be sibling feud. There will be plenty of advice from Junior and Tani. There will be hard holidays. There will be recklessness. There will be Lynn trying to become part of their family. There will be fights. There will be people getting arrested. There will be plenty of teenage rebellion. But in between all that there will also be some fun family time. From shopping with your dad's girlfriend, to teaching your younger brother how to get girls or how to skateboard. And there's so much more!

I really can't wait to publish this! It's a great story and it's not even done! I hope this makes you guys excited for it because I'm excited to show everyone! I will post another update on here with the story Title after I publish it so you will know where to find it!

Thanks for all the support on this story and I hope you guys follow my new story and enjoy it just as much! Much love! Stay tuned!