Some were good like these:
Some gave reviews that said both good and bad:
Some were vicious:
Though these guys never went beyond first nine chapters. There were some other people who were even more vicious and made my blood pressure rise to dangerous levels. But I won't be sharing those comments here.
This is just another attempt of mine to convince you to keep reading if you decide that this is a trashy fanfic.
I am trying so much because I want help with this story. I want to improve it so that reviews like the last two are not seen anymore. I may decide to write an original in the future and I don't want to witness such reviews that may make me want to quit writing altogether.
YOU ARE READING
Harry Potter: Rise of the Spiral
Fanfiction(COMPLETE) Edmund Vulpis discovers the legacy of his ancestors after his mother dies at the hands of his father. With the memories of his progenitor, Naruto Uzumaki, watch as he takes on the wizarding world with the power of chakra and shifts the ge...