Hey! I told you guys I would be updating through out the whole day! Sorry for keeping you guys waiting, though; I was just working on Chapter 10. This chapter is practically about the outburst the boys have about Sofia's age. I just noticed that I got like 34 reads! I'm so happy! Thanks for the ones who have been reading although the chapters I have posted aren't that long. But prepare because from Chapter 5 and on it's going to be chapters of 3 to 5 pages. Okay so here is Chapter 4!
Niall's, Louis's Harry's POV
Eleven?! Why out of all the numbers in the world, it had to be eleven?
Harry's POV
But hey, I was the one that said age is just a number and dated Caroline Flack so that cuts me some slack, right?
Niall's POV
But, c'mon! I'm carefree Nialler so that cuts me some slack, right?
Louis's POV
But to be honest, I'm the one who acts like a kid so that cuts me some slack, right?
Louis!
What has gotten into me? I'm attracted to an eleven year old, for crying out loud!
You have Eleanor Calder. Starbucks-loving, Topshop-obsessed, Soon-to-be-Model Eleanor Calder and here you are, infatuated by an eleven year old. Be more realistic.
My thoughts speak louder than what I'm capable to.
Sofia's POV
Louis, Harry and Niall looked surprised at my age. Why is it that many people that? Do I look older or behave more maturely than others? If so, please let this serve as a testament against my mother's best judgment.
Anyway, why is Louis even interested in my age? Doesn't he have a girlfriend? Because I've seen her and let me say, she is quite the diamond.
As for Harry and Niall...
"Hey, we know you just met us, but would you like to hang-out sometime? You know..." Harry trailed off, a smirk rising on his face.
"Alone without your sister." He whispered in my ear.
That sent chills up and down my spine. I couldn't believe it; he actually said that he wanted to hang-out with me and the lads alone. As much as I would enjoy it, I don't think it's the brightest idea, but of course, my true feelings gave me away.
"Sure." I said with a smile.
They all gave me their numbers and I gave them my mom's number. Yeah, I know that stinks. It's just that the problem is that my mother hasn't and isn't planning on buying me a cellphone! Not even one of those cheap Motorola fliphones or go-phones. However, the only thing I have close to a cellphone is an iPod 5th Generation that only calls when it has WiFi! But for now, that will have to do.
I turned on my iPod to check the time. We've almost spent an hour talking to these guys! I quickly excused us; we said our goodbyes and left.
That was the best time I had while being in a grocery store.
So what do you think about it? I'm not gonna probably post Chapter 5 right now because I want to keep working with Chapter 10. So tomorrow, school. Ugh! Why can't they invent a 7 day weekend? I promise you, life would be so much easier. Well, if I don't finish today, I'll probably will be posting the rest of the chapters tomorrow at 5 or 6 o' clock. Leave your comments and tell me what you think or you can also give me ideas for chapters.
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