Finished? (EDIT)

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Editing this book is a lost cause.

At this point, if I want to get anywhere, I'm going to have to redo it.

I'm using this story as a template for my new book, which will be COMPLETELY SEPARATE.

I don't want you readers to worry about me deleting this book, so I won't. I'll just make a new and improved one on the same account.

Later, I'll show you the title and cover once I start it.

Happy reading!

Edit:
So I finished 23 chapters in the new book.

The cover is really simple, I got lazy

 It's called "First Love, Last Love (Fred Weasley)"

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It's called "First Love, Last Love (Fred Weasley)"

But so much better, in fact I'll give you a list of why it's better:

1) Main character doesn't cry all the time
2) There's actually a plot. I know, unbelievable
3)Grammar/ spelling is so much better (ex. "McGonagall" is spelled correctly)
4) Story is VERY CLEARLY set in Harry's fourth year, meaning the main character has Professor Mad-eye Moody as the DADA
5) I don't switch the DADA teacher every chapter
6) Love story is less awkward and strained and is actually believable
7) The main character does not feud with Hermione over something stupid

I REPEAT

THE MAIN CHARACTER DOES NOT FEUD WITH HERMIONE OVER SOMETHING STUPID

Which brings me to the final one:

8) Main character controls her temper and doesn't scream at people for no reason.

I may add more as I go on. This list is just to convince you to read the new story, but I guarantee every bit of it is true.

Happy reading!

Edit 2:

The rewritten book is completed, and so is the sequel. I'm in the process of writing the third book, a prequel describing the mother's stay at Hogwarts.

That will be the final book, and I already have 56 chapters completed.

I would love for you to check out the series!

Thanks for being here and as always happy reading!!

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