Editing this book is a lost cause.
At this point, if I want to get anywhere, I'm going to have to redo it.
I'm using this story as a template for my new book, which will be COMPLETELY SEPARATE.
I don't want you readers to worry about me deleting this book, so I won't. I'll just make a new and improved one on the same account.
Later, I'll show you the title and cover once I start it.
Happy reading!
Edit:
So I finished 23 chapters in the new book.The cover is really simple, I got lazy
It's called "First Love, Last Love (Fred Weasley)"But so much better, in fact I'll give you a list of why it's better:
1) Main character doesn't cry all the time
2) There's actually a plot. I know, unbelievable
3)Grammar/ spelling is so much better (ex. "McGonagall" is spelled correctly)
4) Story is VERY CLEARLY set in Harry's fourth year, meaning the main character has Professor Mad-eye Moody as the DADA
5) I don't switch the DADA teacher every chapter
6) Love story is less awkward and strained and is actually believable
7) The main character does not feud with Hermione over something stupidI REPEAT
THE MAIN CHARACTER DOES NOT FEUD WITH HERMIONE OVER SOMETHING STUPID
Which brings me to the final one:
8) Main character controls her temper and doesn't scream at people for no reason.
I may add more as I go on. This list is just to convince you to read the new story, but I guarantee every bit of it is true.
Happy reading!
Edit 2:
The rewritten book is completed, and so is the sequel. I'm in the process of writing the third book, a prequel describing the mother's stay at Hogwarts.
That will be the final book, and I already have 56 chapters completed.
I would love for you to check out the series!
Thanks for being here and as always happy reading!!
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Fred Weasley X Reader (FINISHED)
FanfictionYou were in a Muggle school in the same age as Fred and George Weasley. But in the start of summer, Hogwarts gave you the acceptance letter that was unexpected. Your step-father was as confused as you, but luckily your mother was a witch, so she kne...