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Hey, guys.  I am writing this story on Avneil.  They are one of my favorite couples.  And recently when I was watching the jail track where Neil arrests her.  I saw the part where she finally breaks down and yells at him.  For me I loved that scene, but what if it was longer and Neela and Ali had joined.  It would increase the drama.

So I am writing this fanfiction to show what I had hoped would happen at that moment.  For now it would be a short story just focused on this scene, but later on I might turn it into an actual book/story continuing what happens next.

Just a note that Neela has not been visiting Avni as she couldn't face her.  People in jail don't know that Ali and Avni are friends.  Everything else is pretty much the same.

Like I always say everything belongs to the makers and the producers of the show, the only thing that belongs to me is what's happening in the story.

I hope you guys like this story.  I will post the first part and then wait for a response.  Hope you like.  Vote and comment please.

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