chapter 13 redo

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(a/n) Im back my lovelies yeah sorry I didn't update in so long and im gonna redo chapter 13 because I dont want to do the creepypasta mansion in the story because I dont really know much about a lot of the creepypastas and stuff so yeah im just gonna redo it and not add the mansion ok here it goes

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*Jack's P.O.V*

   Sophia soon fell asleep while I was running my hand through her hair. I sat down on the floor with her laying on me. Then I subbenly felt something warm and wet on my chest. I looked down and seen what it was.

Ew...She was drooling on me...Aw but she looks so cute when she's asleep.

I took off my sweater and layed her down on it. I stood up and started to talk to Jeff.

"Hey, thanks for...That." I said while indicating to the two dead cops.

"Its whatever but what the hell are you gonna do with her?! She cant go back home the cops are looking for her!"

"I know that! I dont know what the hell im gonna do with her!" I said making I dont know some sort of weird hand gestures down at Sophia nervously.

I started pasing around with my hands on my head.

"Hey calm down dude... I have this one place not to far from here where I hide out when im in deep shit. You can use it till you figure out what your gonna do."

Jeff handed me a key and said he needs to meet up with this one chick because Ben was still at her house.

~30 minutes later~

I got to the hide out place Jeff was talking about and layed Sophia down on the bed that was on the floor.

I think I should go get some of her stuff from her house. I then took off to her house.

~Several hours later~

*Sophia's P.O.V*

It was raining and I woke up on a bed in a small place that didn't look familiar to me at all.

Then all of the sudden the door slammed open and the guy with the white face and big smile was there.

I then said hi but he didn't reply. Then all of the sudden thunder and lightning bursted out of nowhere and I could see he was covered in blood. He then fell to the floor and I screamed.

I dragged him to the bed I was laying on and pulled him on top of it. I then went over and closed the door. I walked over to him and seen all the blood and vomited in the trash can next to me. I then noticed it wasn't only other peoples blood it was also his blood.

I searched for the wound and it was in his stomach. A bullet wound.

"Shit. Shit. Shit. What do I do?!" I yelled while searchimg through the small room that had trash and blood all over it. Then I seen a bra just in the corner of the room.

Why the fuck does he have a bra... He kills hookers.

I nodded and then freaked out again because I still didn't know what the hell I was going to do.

I searched in the doors next to me and luckily found plyers and a needle and thread. He probably has been through something like this before I guess. I grabbed the plyers and pulled out all of the bullet pieces out from his stomach while trying to hold back the vile.

He then bursted up and started screaming bloody murder. I tried to get him to calm down but he wouldn't and he started bleeding out so I did what I had to. I punched him as hard as I could in the face and he knocked out.

SON OF A MOTHER FUCKING BITCH THAT HURT. Shit I probably broke it. Thats not important though I must help this mother fucker.

I tried to shake off the pain but no luck so I continued with my other hand. I started to stitch up the wound and was quite successful. I then wrapped my hand up with ripped cloth I found on the floor.

All the sudden I hear a loud gasp of air coming fron behind me. I jumped and turned around.

"Dude, calm down! Calm down. Now tell me what the hell is going on and why the hell do you have a bullet wound in your stomach!"

"RICHY! *gasp* RICHY IS COMING FOR HER!"

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HEYYYYYY OK IM DONE WITH THE REDO I THINK I LIKE IT BECAUSE IM STARTED TO WRITE IN ONE OF YOUR GUYS' CHARACTERS AND HE BLENDED RIGHT IN I WAS GONNA PUT A COP BUT THEN I REMEMBERED ONE OF YOUR GUYS' CHARACTER WEAPONS WAS A GUN SO YEAH. I HOPED YOU GUYS LIKED IT I LIKED IT. SORRY IT WAS SHORT BUT YKNOW ITS A START AT ME COMING BACK TO WRITING THE STORIES

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