Grammatics

Quotations

Heya... I'll just get straight into the helpful tips and tricks.

FIRST THING::
Quotations by different people should be separated by a paragraph. To indicate that someone else is talking.

For example:
Sally said "my dog tastes like chicken"

"Awful joke, Sally" said Jim

ANOTHER THING::

Please put your quotation marks at the front and the back of what is being said because (maybe it's just me) it takes the reader out of the book.
It's not that hard to put the [""] at the end and beginning of each quotation.

These are basic mistakes and rules on proper English, so idk I suggest just to make writing a bit better, then add these simple rules to make grammar freaks like me off your back.

That's the first update from me...
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