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    I wake up and quickly get ready. I decide I might not have much time after school to change so I put on my prettiest dress. A bright red dress that flows down and stops right above my knees. I run to school, not wanting to wait for my bus.
The school day goes by pretty fast considering how excited I am. As soon as school ends I receive a text, from Ethan of course. "Hey, wanna hang out today? I'm free rn" it says. I quickly respond with a yes.
We are going to meet at our spot in the abandoned building in a few minutes.
I quickly run there and set up, taking out my watch. He shows up a few minutes later.
Ethan's POV
I walk into the building filled with excitement. She's standing there waiting, a smile on her face. She looks pretty nice in her red dress. It flows down to right above her knees. Part of me wishes she dressed up for me, but I doubt that is the case.
Your POV
I motion for him to sit down and he excitedly obeys. "Okay Ethan. I'm going to count down from 10 to 1. The lower I get, the more tired you will get. When I reach 1 you will be in a state of bliss, a peaceful trance. You will be partially awake but calm. You won't be able to move your arms or legs though, they will be too heavy."

10... he looks very awake and vigilant
9... his breathing slows a bit
8... he starts to look a little more calm
7... his arms start to move down
6... his eyes start dropping a bit
5... his shoulders start to slump
4... his arms hit the armrests quietly
3... his shoulders slump all the way
2... I notice his eyes getting heavier
1... he smiles, deep in a trance

"How do you feel?" I ask.
"Tired.." he sleepily murmurs. He looks so good right now in his entranced state. I almost want to kiss him but I refrain, I have to wait for that.
"Good, are you ready to begin?" He slowly nods his head, starting to smile. "Okay, just listen to the sound of my voice. The more you listen, the sleepier you will get. Your mind will soon go blank. Thinking is too hard right now, if you try to struggle, it will only lead you deeper." I command.
Ethan's POV
I listen to what she says, it all seems nice and calm until I hear one thing, "Your mind will soon go blank." I didn't want that. I started trying to fight the hypnosis but I was already deep under. As I struggled to focus on one thing, a simple thing.. my name. I tried to focus but this just made my brain hurt. I wouldn't lose the fight that easily, I still tried to focus helplessly, to no avail.
Your POV
"Resistance is vain, you will slowly start to slip deeper and deeper." I calmly state. He was definitely fighting but I knew he wouldn't be able to keep it up for long. "Thinking is becoming very hard, it's so tempting to just let me think for you. Thinking for yourself just hurts your brain while sinking deeper feels so good." I say hoping he will give up soon. I need him to do this for my next step. "Just surrender, you can't even talk anymore. Everything is too complicated, it's hard to even make a noise, to recall your own name." I hear him start to whimper and whine. He looks a bit uncomfortable but I know that it will be over soon.
Ethan's POV
Thinking becomes very hard, I feel myself slipping. I try to make noises to show her I'm still in control. What's my name again? Whatever, I just want to focus on her voice, she can think for me now. I don't care, I just want her to do everything.
Your POV
I see him completely relax and I know he has surrendered. "Okay Ethan, now that you're completely under my control, everything is good. You feel so much pleasure from this release." I see him try to form a smile but fail, even that is too hard for him at this point. He looks so hot all entranced and helpless. He looks.. happy. "Now, you will start to wake up when I stop talking, you will feel attracted to me. You want to do what I want and please me. You will only remember feeling relaxed and calm, nothing that I said or did."
Ethan's POV
As she stops talking I come to my senses. What even happened? I only remember how amazing it felt, she truly is amazing. I look up at her and notice how beautiful she looks.
To be continued...

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