Hello!

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So, I do this thing where I reread my whole story and while I do love where it's gone so far, I've realized I'm far off track from the original prompt i made.

Rayla and Callum-older badass fighters, Share unbreakable magic bond

That was the entire basis for the story. Yes I've incorporated those specific things, but I haven't been doing them justice. I kinda shied away from the mark and I made Rayla seem weak while making Callum look overly strong. I didn't realize this until now so as the story progrsses, I'm going to do my best to give those two point's more significance. 

Also there are some major plot holes i accidentally made when writ time jumps like when I did the three year time skip in chapter 9. While I could just ignore them, I like to have clean edges so I'm adding subtle details to clean up the loose ends I wrote. 

ex: how Ghia lost her leg and how William knows of Rayla and Callum's bond. 

I know this wasn't important, but it is to me so if you noticed anything that I miss please leave a comment. 


Also thank you to those you keep leaving comments. Its great to know that people not only read my story, but are also liking it. So for those that enjoy this story, don't worry for the ending. I haven't decided on the next story ark, but this story won't end. I love it to much. 

And thank you all for reading so far.

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