IN MY EYES
BY: suna5775
First off,
A beautiful story I MUST say.
It is written rather well, and honestly it keeps me hooked by each word. I really like how you found a way to manipulate how you have written the story, to add to the plot. (Ex. The italics). It was very clever and one of the parts I really loved about the story itself.
I wish it was longer! It's such a beautiful, and unique idea, that I think could be built upon to make a longer story out of. To better enhance Jungkook's and Y/N's relationship, and possibly to show the back ground of the two a little more. Maybe hear more about Jungkook's own life, and more of his aspects.
HOWEVER! It is your story, and it is amazing the way it is already. That's simply my input. :)
I had no issue reading the story at all! (To answer your other question in the request).
My favorite parts:
- Jungkook's kindness :)))) Hes such a sweetheart. Y'all where can I find a man that-
- just the way the story is written: it's really a beautiful piece of writing and I truly wish everyone gets to read it
Would I recommend?: Do I really have to say anything? OF COURSE!
Ending note: OMG thank you for requesting!!! I hope this didn't take too long! I'll be working on your next one soon! I hope you're doing well. :)
- Uyennie 💕
