Loveria (Completed)

❤️Chapter 11❤️

Previously on LOVERIA..

Avneet was getting jealous of that girl Kritzzz..
But who is she?
So here the character sketch of that girl..

KRITIKA NIGAM (A.K.A KRITZZZZ / KRI)
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A 19 Year old sweet and bubbly girl.
Cousin of Siddharth and Abhishek. No one knows about her. Only Vaishnavi knows her by her name not nickname.
She is sweet to all, but whoever messes with her friends, then you all can see her other side...
A Total Badass girl..

NOW LET'S CONTINUE.

*At College*

Some girl is seeing coming from the main gate towards the college..
While she was walking busy in her phone, a boy was running from someone and they both collided and were going to fall..

Author's POV

Aap log kya sochh rahe ho..
Girl girne vaali hogi aur ladka bacha lega.
Aisa laga toh bilkul galat..

POV ended

Because of collision not girl, that boy was going to fall down, and that girl saved him by holding his wrist and waist.

That boy was lost in her beautiful eyes but that girl being sassy. Snapped her hands in front of his face..

Girl: Oh hello Papa ki pari.. Kidhar khoye hue ho.. Utna nahi hai kya. Haat dukh rahe hai mere..

He realises and he got up.

Boy: Sorry.. aur Papa ki pari kise bola, Riyaz Aly hai mera naam.

Yes that Papa ki pari was none other than Riyaz Aly😂😂

Girl: Haa toh Mr Riyaz Aly, sahi toh bola maine.. tumne kahin dekha hai ki boy gir raha hai aur ladki bacha rahin hai usko..
Iska ulta hota hai naa zyadatar
Kya yrr tum bhi
aur toh tum toh ek chote se collision se hi girne vaale the.
Kya yr Mr Riyaz Aly..

Riyaz: Oh hello aisa kuchh nahi hai..Mein..

Girl: Are abhi choda mere paas tumse gappe ladaane ka time nahi hai..
Jab free hongi toh tumhe bataungi.. tab tum apna RIYAZ PURAAN start kar dena..
Chalo Bye.

Riyaz: Tumhari toh..
(He was trying to be angry but all waste, he was smiling all time..)

Riyaz's POV

Kitni cute thi yrr, aise baat aaj tak kisi ladki ne nahi kiya mujhse..
Sahi mein yrr yeh bandi bahot sahi hai.
Kaash yeh meri....

Chiii kya soch raha hai Riyaz Aly, you only love Avneet Kaur you can't fall for anyone else..

Par phir bhi yrr cute toh hai maan na padega...

Chalo yrr let's go kab tak sochega uske baare mein..

Girl's POV

After convo. With that Papa ki pari par pata nahi voh gussa kar raah tha par uske face pe smile bhi thi..
Leave it, I went towards the office..
There I saw my chomu. He was talking to some girl, she was so beautiful I think she is his girlfriend, he didn't told me, I will kill him if she is his Girlfriend.
But now let's meet my Chomu..

I yelled 'CHOMUUUU' and ran towards him. He turned back listened to me with shock and happy face and I jumped on him and he caught me..

Boy (Chomu): Chohi aa gayi tu. Kaisi hai..

Girl: Chomu tujhe kitni baar kaha hai mujhe Chohi mat bulaya kar sabke saamne.. I don't like it.. you know naa yrr..

Boy: Toh tu bhi muje Chomu mat bulaya kar sabke saamne.. Tu mujhe Sid bula liya karna.

Oh toh guys that Chomu was our one and only Siddharth Nigam..

Girl: Haa toh tu bhi muje Kritzzz hi bulana sab ke samne.. but akele mein apan Chomu Chohi hi rahenge.. Ok..

Oh toh guys that girl was none other than Kritzzz...

Sid: Ok deal..
(They both shakes hand and laughs..)

Kri's POV

While me and Chomu were talking, I noticed that girl who was standing with Chomu, was burning with jealousy and was filled with anger..
So I decided to play with her..
I winked at Chomu and eyed towards her..
He understood and smiled..

Sid's POV

While me and Chohi were talking.. I saw chohi winked at me and eyed towards my Avu.. I saw her that she was burning with jealousy and filled with Anger.
I understood what chohi was trying to say and I smiled..

Kri: Toh Siddo kaise ho?? (Putting her hand on his shoulder..)

Sid: Mein badiya Kritzzz, tu bata? (Keeping his hand on her shoulder)

Kri: Vaise Siddo yeh kaun hai??

Sid: Oh haan, Kri isse mil yeh hai meri dost Avu matlab Avneet Kaur..

Kri: Hi Avneet
(I forwarded my hand and she shaked hands with me with a fake smile.. I was laughing hard inside..)

Sid: Kri chal naa Bhai se milte hai.. tujhe kal se dekhne ke liye voh bahkt excited hai..

Kri: Haa toh chal naa..

Sid's POV

We holded each other's hand and I tried to ignore Avu and went to meet Bhai with Chohi..

Avu's POV

When me and Bandar were talking I saw some girl was running towards Bandar and calling him Chomu and he turned back and she jumped on him..

How she dare to call my Bandar, Chomu and he also called her Chohi..
Only I am allowed to call him with that names..

I was filled with jealousy and anger. How dare she jumped on my Bandar, he was also happy with that..

I was like.. "Ek baar voh mere haath mein aa jaaye mein uska moon thod doongi..
Aur phir uske baad iss bandar ko sabak sikhaungi.."

And she was none other than Kritzzz.. and muje pehle hi samajh jaana chayiye tha ki Sid aur kise dekhke itna khush hoga...

Then at last they noticed me.. Kritzzz forwarded her hand for a shake hand and I with fake smile also forwarded my hand..
Then yeh Bandar ka bachha callled her to meet Abhi bhai..
They hold each other's hand and ran to meet Abhi bhai ignoring me..
I felt really bad, and felt like crying, Did that Bandar really loves me?
I don't know why I am feeling so bad but I don't like their closeness at all.
I think he loves her..

I went to my favourite place
whenever I feel hurt or lonely I go there..

POV ENDED...

TO BE CONTINUED.

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