Divergent High

Chapter 5

Tobias's POV:

When Tris and I get back to are friends they ask us if we want to go to a welcome to Divergent High party tonight. We all agree to meet back there in 3 hours.

"Why 3 HOURS?!" Uriah asks with a little kids voice.

And the girls answer with "Because we need to get ready! Duh?!"

"Right he knew that!" Zeke says with a smirk.

"No he didn't" I say with a smirk.

Uriah gives a "HEY" look for about 10 seconds till he says "No I really didn't!"

We all laugh and go are separate ways.

Tris's POV:

Us girls go back to Christina and I's dorm to get ready.

Christina wears a sexy red short party dress with a v-neck and the top is sparkly with a flowing bottom. With black heels.

Lynn wears a short black dress with a little bit of lace and a little bit of drape around the edges. That was only we could get her wear. With gold heels.

Marlene wears a tight pencil skirt short black dress with a lace turtle neck like style that has a v-neck kind of dip. With gold heels.

Shauna wears a strapless purple short lace dress that has a design on the top with a gray belt. With blacks heels.

And I wear a short strapless baby blue dress that the top is sparkly silver pattern and a flowing bottom. With black heels.

We all put on smoking eye make up and red (all different shades) lips.

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Tobias's POV:

All us guys wear dark jeans and different colored/styles of flannel shirts.

We wait about half an hour till the girls arrive. The all look beautiful and hot.

But...

Tris looks adorably hotter, like HOTTER THAT LAVA hot, and Zeke looks over at me and tells me to stop drooling. Tris then giggles when I close me mouth as quickly as possible.

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Tris's POV:

We have been at the party for about 1 1/2 hours and Four can't staring at me. So I decided to talk to him because I think he may like me but I also know that I like him.

I walk over and say "So do you want to go get some punch?"

"Sure" he says.

We get some punch and then he grabs my had and pulls me into a small private room were its not as loud.

"Can I ask you a question now that I can hear myself think?!" He says.

"Sure" I reply.

"Well" he starts with his hand in the back of his neck. "I was wondering if you would like to go out with me sometime?!"

I want to scream YES but instead I kiss him and then I pull back almost as quickly as I did it and say "Does that answer your question?!"

"Yes it does" then he kisses me. And we stay there like that for a little bit until we decide to go back to his dorm because we are only 19 and someone brought out shots and alcohol which we don't need.

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How was chapter 5? I decided to make it mixed POVs and I felt like this was a good ending. Please give me feed back on what I should do, am doing, and or could do better. I need the feed back.

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