I'm not happy with the
Response....
Silent readers kuch bologe ki,
Bus story padhke seedha
Nikal loge???
Agar aise hi Raha toh
I'm fast forwarding the story, and finishing it off in next two updates...
Aur end padhke pakka achcha na lagega
Tum subko...
Dhamki na derahi,
Bus umeed Kar rahi ki thoda sa
Efforts aap bhi daalo,
Kyunki hum bhi ek update likhne mein
Ghantoo bait the he...
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lt. Ud - " Sir, as per the higher authority and data bases the exact mission date is...."
Capt. Muraad - " Hahahahaha...
Abee, mission ka date nahi Teri halaal hone ka date poocha... "
He said laughing his lungs out...at the brief explanation of Ud...who never fails to addup his technical terms in between talks...
Capt. Nishanth - " wahi toh bol Raha bechara.... "
He tried to interfere in the funny convo, holding a cup of coffee...
Ud - " Exactly sir.. actually the date was..."
Not allowing the goat ups bakra to speak, Nishanth continued,
" Higher authority means his parents and date bases means..."
Muraad guessing a little,
" Kundli ??..."
Ud with a aww expression,
" You both are actually brilliant sir... Meri Shaadi teen mahine baad he and..."
Muraad - " halaal tu tabhi hoga...
Kyun Raj??? ...."
He asked dragging Rajveer who was busy in romancing with his files...
Rajveer showing them his thumbs down, raised his head suggesting they are wrong....
Nishanth - " usase kyaa poochna Muraad... isne toh abhi abhi Shaadi ka laddu khaya he, meeta hi lagta he shuru mein...
Kuch din hone Doo...dusra swad bhi milega..."
he said winking at Rajveer...in a teasing tone...
Muraad - " ab woh bolega laddu humesha Meeta hota he, chaahe apne Shaadi ka ho yaa dusronka...."
Ud in a confused tone,
" But Shaadi aur laddus dononka konsa link he???... Aur khudki dusronki Shaadi what's all these ???.... "
Nishant - " Aree, Junior bakre,
Apne Shaadi mein tu khud halaal hota he aur dusronka Shaadi mein joh halaal hota he uska mazak udane ka mauka milna, it's like sone pe suhaag..."
He said strangling Ud 's neck with his elbow....
Rajveer - " Just leave him guys... "
He tried to save UD from his mastikor batch mates...
Muraad - " Kyun be??
Usko toh hum lessons derahe ki Shaadi ke baad hota kyaa he...kaise apni aazadi ko pinjre mein rakhna padhta he...
Har baat pe yeh sochoo ki biwi sochegi kyaa?? Reaction uska muskurata aayega yaa...."
Nishant continuing his friend's words,
" Kitchen se ek belan.... Agar chook ke bhi dostonke saath Bahar khake aaya that too without your wife's permission, ek hafta tum kitchen ka duty sambhaloo yaa fir laundry...."
Ud - " But sir I donno how to cook!!..."
He said getting nervous...wiping his sweat beeds...
Muraad controlling his laughter at this innocent creature,
" Jab hall mein sone ki baari aayegi tab murde bhi khud uth ke kaam karne lagenge...."
Nishant - " main exception hu yaha... Apni khaandan ka eklauta chef hu main and apne batch ka bhi...."
Muraad - " Iske haath ka khana toosne ke naam pe Naveen do drills mein apne pair tudvake Gunny ko jitaya tha... Kyaa din the woh..."
He said dreamily....walking through those memory lines...
Ud - " But sir, what about me?
Mujhe toh khana karna nahi aata..."
He scratched his head, then looking at Rajveer,
" Sir, Kya aap mujhe..."
Muraad - " Sochna bhi math...he is such a horrible cook... Usko yeh Tak pata nahi ki palak aur pudeena konsa he...."
Rajveer passed a look to his buddy,
" Abee, itna toh pata he mujhe... Captain hu...
Izzat se baat karliya ....."
Before he could complete the line, his phone beeped, alerting him....
Muraad peeped in that direction, as the phone was currently connected to the charger....
" Naina....."
He read it loudly....and observed how Rajveer's facial expressions were changing to horrible one...
Nishant - " Yeh dekh Udiye...idhar bai ka phone aaya nahi.... Pati ke chehre pe pasina aagaya..."
He lifted the phone, throwing it in air, making Rajveer more anxious...
She never calls him... at this....
He looked at the clock which showed past 12...
At this hour...
Uffo Raj... Aaj Tak usne call kiya bhi he joh ghante ka soch Raha tu...
Ab Kar rahi he Matlab???
He hopped down from his chair dismantlling the files on floor and tried to snatch his phone...
Rajveer - " Muraad... Phone de... Koyi emergency hogi warna Naina....."
He instantly picked the call only to hear the sound of vehicles in background....
" Hellooo...
Naina.... Nainaaaaa....
Tum abhi Tak Ghar nahi pahunchiii....
Nai....."
He shouted to make his voice reach clearly to her...
Other side,
" Ranveeerrrrrr.... Yeh log.... mujhe..... aaahhh.....
Ranveeerrrrrr.... Please save me... Yeh log mujhe chodenge nahiiiiiii..... mujhe gaseetke leke jaayenge....."
Her panicked voice made his inner self jolt with fear and pain....
Rajveer calming his nerves,
" Naina.... Listen to me...
Phehle.yeh batavoo ki tum ho kaha... "
Naina - " Woh main..... jagah toh pata nahi Ranveer... lekiin yaha passmein ek...."
As usual the phone got disconnected ...
Kyun Bhai aisa sirf films yaa serials mein hona chahiye???
Chaloo story mein bhi daaldeti hu 🤭
Rajveer - " Shiitttttt......"
He knocked his leg with a strong chair in defence... of his helplessness....
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Black Hearts
FanfictionMoving on is about accepting and learning, not ignoring and forgetting. Because, there is love after 'love failure'.... There is life after 'love failure'.... "Let's fall in love once again...." A Raina Kahani....
