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Wow this has been a fucked up week for yn everything bad has happened to her I fill guilty thoee cuz she told us to stop but we didn't n she just passed out I think it's stress

Doctor:(comes out)family of yn yln

Evby:(stand ups and runs to the doctor)

Ym:is my baby ok(sniffs)

Doctor:well it's a possibility she won't make it right now she's in a coma but she passed out because of stress but only one at a time can visit

Ym:I'll go (goes in room n looks at you)

A/n u have a lot of tubes hooked up to u

Ym:(eyes water)baby I'm sorry if I mistreated u in any way or I haven't paid attention to u(walks closet to your bed and grabs ur hand)just please wake. Up for moms (kisses it and leaves)

Ym:(sits down)

*1hr later*

A/n everybody but jaay has went in n it's his turn

Domonique:nigga go

Jaay:(walks in pulls up a chair by ur bed and sits)yn I'm sorry I cheated it's just u were gone and I missed ur kisses n laughing n I got hard thinking about u so I did what u did I'm quite sure chres  said the same thing and u don't want to here it I just want u to  know I'm sorry I love u n pleases wake up (eyes water)I just want you to wake u can treat me however just wake up for me please(tear falls and lands in ur hand)ok well (gets up kisses your forehead but is still holding your hand)bye(about to leave but you squeeze his hand)

Yn:I love u too but please go get a doctor I'm tired of feeling people spit n cry that's shit nasty n they was yelling in my ear

Jaay:y-wait so u were up this whole time n didn't sat nun

Yn:yeah I was trying to go to sleep but y'all kept coming in so I just listened but enough talking go get a doctor my back n neck hurts

Jaay:(laughs)ok yn (walks out smiling)

Chres:nigga what u smiling for my nigga is up in that room fighting for her life n u come out smiling the hell wrong with u I should bust a cap in yo ass(jumps up)

evbdy:(holds him back and looks at jaay like he's crazy)nigga what the hell wrong with you

Jaay:go ask yn

Everybody runs in your room

Jaay:(walks to front desk)can u get a doctor for yn yln

Clirk:yes

Jaay;(goes to room n goes in)

Yn:did u bring my doctor

Jaay:no

Yn:o lord o where o where could my doctor be

Tbc........

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