Ondreaz Lopez...

1. The party

Me and my best friend Mya are going to a party tonight. We were meeting some friends there.

It was 1 pm, we were in our dorm room and we're discussing where we were going to eat. I wanted chick-fil-a and Mya wanted Wendy's. We decided to go to Wendy's. When we were done eating we went back home and started to look through our closets to find something to wear for tonight.  The party was neon themed.

I was going to wear this little pink dress, I had a little black clutch with it and black heels with rhinestones on it.

Mya was gonna wear this yellowish dress, with yellow heals and a silver over the shoulder bag.

It was around 7 pm when we started to get ready, take a shower and do our make up and stuff. At 8.30 we put our dresses on and headed out. The party was just around the block of our building so we just walked there. When we got inside it was already packed with people. We went to the kitchen to get us some drinks. We looked around the room and saw the rest of our friends standing on the other side of the room, we walked over to them and said hello and stuff. Our friend maiko brought two of his friends with him, and to be honest they looked hot af. " hey I'm Ondreaz and this is my brother tony." Said ondreaz. "Hey I'm y/n and this is Mya." I said "cool you live around here?" Ondreaz said. " yeah we live just around the block." " how about you?" I said. "We live 2 blocks from maiko." Ondreaz said. " oh cool that isn't too far." I was getting awkward now because the longer I looked at him the prettier he got. Sh*t i'm staring at him now. He chuckled a bit and I blushed. "Are you okay?" He said smiling. " yeah I'm fine." I said smiling back.

Me and Mya danced a bit, we walked around the house and came across some other people we knew and danced with them. We talked and laughed a lot with tony and ondreaz tonight.
When it was around 4 am we looked for maiko because the party was starting to end. We decided to all go back to maiko's place because he had the biggest house. It was a 15 minute, I started to whine about how my feet were hurting and that it was such a long walk. " you're such a baby." Said Mya. "It's okay I can take you on my back if you want." Ondreaz said. " no it's okay I can walk it's no big deal." I said. " no don't worry it's okay i don't mind." He said. " okay, thank you." I said smiling and I hopped on his back. The wind blew threw his hair and it smelled sooo good. When we got to maiko's place we all crashed into the couch. We watched a movie and everyone had fallen asleep except for me and ondreaz. We talked for an hour about all kinds of stuff. He was really nice and funny, we laughed a lot. It was around 6 am so I decided to wake up Mya to get back home. Ondreaz suggested to drive us home, he didn't drink and it was a 20 min walk so that was nice. He dropped us of at the house and said " hey I would like to hang out again some time do you want to exchange numbers?" " yeah ofcourse that would be nice." We gave each other our phones and put our numbers in. " so I guess I'll see you again soon!?" He said. " yeah for sure!" I said smiling and closed the car door. As I walked to the building he drove of.

Hey everyone, I'm sorry if this is really bad, this is my first time writing a story and publishing it. Please if u have any notes or suggestions just put them out there, I wanna know how and what I can improve.
Thank you!!