This is the new cover! Made it ma self... Anyway, I. So I came up with a new and improved plot line, with all the same characters, with slightly different names.
This is the cover! Tell me what you think in detail in the comments. Here are the exact details of the story.
Vivian (formerly Orchid) loves dragons, but she is never to see one, for she is held in her palace like a prison! for her parents know what she doesn't: she has the Curse of the DragonKatherine (formerly Bo) has always been suspicious of Vivian, and when she sees the scales collecting on her vanity, she begins to watch her every move.
David is a surprise, but just know that if he is honey, Vivian is a honeybee.
Nina is the fairy who cursed Vivian.
So tell me what you think! I will post 3 more chapters, each a pic of a character, and (hopefully) feedback.
This in addition to being the cover, the pic is of Vivian. Feedback?