Lonely by NirjaThakkar
(On going)
Naisha - an unfortunate girl who should be celebrating her first birthday was now lying in a footpath of a busy street with her 7 year old brother Samuel, abandoned by their own mother.
Why was she abandoned? Which mother can leave her children on the footpath? After this deed of hers would she still be called a mother just because she have birth to them ? Who is there father ? Would she ever experience a motherly affection ? What does the fate have in store for Naisha ? Would she be always confined to a footpath or would there be a sudden U- turn by fate? Would she ever be loved as much as her brother loves her? Would there be a Prince Charming off a grand palace or would there e a road side Romeo with the same footpath? Would she ever be able to solve the mystery of her life or get more mysteries added to her life?
Rate: 7
My personal opinion is that this story has a great potential and that although it's not on top charts, but -like I've said- a little recognition, appreciation, and kindness towards a first novel is very motivational for the author . It helps ... A lot ! Trust me, I see some stories go from 600 reads to 11k just by people commenting what they should do to make EVERYTHING about it better. That's grammar, spelling, and the story. As you get more views you tend to care more about the quality of your book.
Now, the story line is something that would capture my attention. So go to her profile, click on her novel and if you like it. Vote it! Comment! And even tell people.
I like it , so I really hope you do too. Thanks guys :P
~Meghan :3
***I DO NOT OWN THIS NOR DID I WRITE ANY PART OF THIS NOVEL !! ALL CREDIT GOES TO THE AUTHOR***
