Wattpad Comment ni Mr. Perfect

chapter 1

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CHAPTER ONE

“He’s so rude!” sigaw ko sa phone ko.

“Ow.” Sabi naman ng kausap ko sa kabilang linya. “Kelangan ba talagang sumigaw, Kate? I know you’re pissed and everything but c’mon! Have mercy on my eardrums naman!”

“Jace, isa na lang talaga bibinggo na sa akin yun!” sabi ko habang naka-glare sa screen ng laptop ko.

“Ano ba kase sabi niya?” I heard her sigh.

“Check mo na lang kase!”

“I can’t! Nagmamadali ako! Actually, kelangan ko na ngang umalis eh.” Sabi niya na medyo guilty rin ang tono ng boses.

I sighed. “Okay, okay. May lakad nga pala kayo ngayon ni Dylan.”

“Yep! Excited na nga ako eh!” she replied cheerfully.

I smiled. “Halata nga po. She she. I don’t want you to be late. Have fun sa ‘date’ niyo ah? Bigyan mo na lang ako ng update mamaya.”

Kahit hindi ko siya nakikita, I’m pretty sure na nagbablush siya. “Shut up, Kate. It’s not exactly a date. It’s more like just hanging out as friends.”

“Sure, Jace. Whatever you say, Jace.” Sabi ko, smiriking.

Napatawa siya. “Di naman ibig-sabihin na lalabas kami, date na yun agad. Sira ka.”

“Eh ano palang tawag dun?”

“Um... Ah... Hey, look at the time! Usapan namin alas-tres kami magkikita! It’s already 2:45. Well, it was nice talking, Kate. Talk to you later na lang.”

And with that, she hung up.

“Bye, Jace.” Sabi ko sa dead na linya and pinatong na lang yung phone ko sa may tabi ng laptop ko. Bigla na naman akong naasar.

Nakakakulo talaga ng dugo tong nilalang na to. I mean, I know na I’m not a good writer and everything but is it really necessary to say na ‘Your story is really... something. The plot is confusing. Masyadong mong finocus dun sa love story kahit na ang genre mo ay science-fiction and fantasy. Actually, WALA ngang nangyayareng supernatural para maiconsider siya as sci-fi or fantasy so I don’t understand kung baket nasa top list siya ng genre na yun kahit na in the first place, wala siya dapat dun. And as for the love story, it’s SOO cliché. Walang originality. Gangster. Player. What? Seriously? Pinagsama-sama mo lahat sa story mo yung mga common masyado dito sa Wattpad and it’s nakakabobo na. Rich guy. Poor girl. Gangster guy. Nice girl. Popular yung guy and then loser yung girl and suddenly, sila na. Why not change it up? I understand that this is your story and everything so ikaw ang lang dapat ang masusunod dito pero I just want to voice out my opinion. Criticism is normal, right? You should learn how to take it well. Okay, enough Mr. Nice Guy. This is the WORST STORY dito. You better delete it kase this is the combination of all the stupid ideas dito sa Wattpad. Baka masira pa ang reputation ng Wattpad since this is NOT sci-fi- AT ALL- and yet nandun siya sa category na yun. Ano na lang sasabihin nila? So yeah. BURAHIN MO NA TO.Oh and by the way, this chapter sucks. BIG TIME.To be more precise, this story is STUPID. KBYE.

Oh di ba magagalit ka? Kahit private message yan and everything, hindi ba parang gusto mo ng murahin yung tao na yun? Sino ba siya para magsalita ng ganyan? Ang harsh niya! I know naman na half of his words are true since wala pa ngang supernatural events yung story but it’s getting there! Masyado lang siyang impatient para sabihing wala pang nangyayareng sci-fi! It’s labeled as ON-GOING for a reason! Hindi pa tapos! Shocks! Kumukulo talaga dugo ko sa kanya!