Orphan Spider man

Chapter 1

if you didn't read the description I will just write it to you So enjoy my long explanation of Peter becoming an orphan just so if you didn't read the description but, if you did you can skip this chapter ( also, the thought of the character will be in italic) also Peter is going to be Bi because why not and there angst (depression), fluff (cuteness), also family time. And all of
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Peter Parker: Pov

Ned and I were working on homework and scheduling my next patrol at his house when I heard my phone ringing, I've got a call from the hospital.

"Hello.... is this, Peter Parker?" a woman on the other line whispered, she was stumbling over her words on each other as she continued

"Yes?" I said

" Well, your aunt at the hospital and w-" 

"WHAT!?"  I said, standing up " HOW DID THIS HAPPEN"

Ned looked up confused and worried

"Well she was in a car accident or hit and run, I wasn't informed which one it, but she still alive but.... I don't think she going to live any longer, so we ca-"

"shitshitshit " my voice was trembling, I started to cry" please no..... I'm coming now"  

" the hospital she at is Bronx hospital "

"OK"

" And sir, I'm so sorry"

"....."

I hang up the phone I didn't even want to talk to her

"Peter?..... what happened," Ned asked, worried

" ....... Aunt May is in the hospital... I need to go" I was clenching my hand

" I'm coming with you," He said

"you don't have-"  

"I want to, I want to see if your aunt is ok, too"

"fine"

I ran out of Ned's house. come on please aunt may don't die on me, please. I reached the hospital I walked in with Ned even though I thought I left him because I was too busy thinking of Aunt May if was going to die or not. Ned and me when to the front desk and asked where was Aunt may. 

" Sorry, she can't have any people be with her right now, they are trying to pump blood into her body and try to keep her breathing calm and stable, so sit down in the waiting room," the desk lady said   

Ned sat down in the chair. While I was walking back and forth, then Ned tells me to sit down and waiting. I started to break down please Aunt may I need you to survive, PLEASE PLEASE come aunt may then he feel his friend hug trying to comfort him

"shhhhh it Ok Pete she going to be fin. Come on, let it all out."

Peter started to cry in his friend's arms. then an officer came to us

" um excuse me.... sir, but are you, Peter Parker"

"y-yes"

"We are still trying to find the person who did this to your aunt because it was hit and run like the car hit your aunt and drive off......." he paused " and we have told you that...if  your  aunt doesn't make it, w-"

"SHE WILL MAKE DON'T SAID THAT "I screamed "she...will...make......it " I trailed off

"well I said if she doesn't make it then, we have to put you in an orphanage since your 15, and the orphanage you are taking is called the little dreamer, I'm sorry man." He said in a sad tone

I started to cry harder. I don't want to be an orphan please give me luck for one pls Parker luck please make aunt may, your all that I have. then the police officer left

 then the doctor comes to me and Ned

"  I'm  sorry to tell this but....." Peter looked up at the doctor "she is dead, I'm very very sorry"

"NOOOOOOO, please tell me you joking pls " I cried  then ran out of the hospital he needs some fresh air, god pls this can be happening, now his whole family that he knew died except for him

"come, Peter... I'm sorry about you aunt to come let bring you the officer told me where it was." Ned said coming from the hospital

This is the first chapter I ever made in my life is finished and if I made any mistake pls tell me. 

704 words YAY