yay another one
so the thing I don't like:
this stupid dialogue thingy.
I'm gonna use Oliver and Fukase for an example, but this is what I mean(this is the and one):
Oliver: Hey, Fukase? I gotta tell you something...
Fukase: Okay? You can tell me anything!
Oliver: You sure?
Fukase: Yeah! I'll always be here no matter what!
okay this is trash. I understand if its like in text messages in the story, but just normal every day speaking, it's stinky.
okay yeah hi uwu
