*LAST TIME*
Red:ROWLET I CHOSE YOU
Lille:Snowy freeze them
Red:At full power now...
*chapter*
Red:AT FULL POWER NOW
Red & rowlet Glowed shacking the whole battle field.
Red:Use...
Rowlet Glowed an Orange
Red:SEED BOMB!!!!!!!!!!
Rowlet In 1 hit finished off the Lucrio's who woke up straight away and walked over to Red.
Red:THIS IS WHAT I CALL JUDGEMENT
Lille:Calm down will you
Max:Uhh we're down to 4 Pokémon each Bonnie
Bonnie:It's time hehehehehehehe huh?
Red:Rowlet return Alright Feel my Aura Pidgot I chose you!.!
Max:Let's do it Goodra
Bonnie:Let's do it Shiny Goodra
Red:Hmmm Hey Max How come you don't have any shiny's
Max:There shared just she gets a longer turn
The crowd all saw red smirk evilly.
Red:Sounds like you should get a fair turn why don't you tell her I see it in your Aura
Max:But i love her I don't care
Red:Stop lying to yourself to your sister to your girlfriend
Max:What do you know
Red:I simply know all of your crimes
Max:stop saying that
Red:Not till you stop don't make me say it
Max:You must have issues to!
Red:No not really I don't really care about anything not after what all of you did
Max:What are you talking about huh?
Ref:BOTH GOODRA's are unable to battle
Red/Lille/max/Bonnie:What?
Squishy:I took his place they fainted at the sight of me LoL
Red:Really oh well huh?
Both Goodra walk over to Ash's side
Red:Well that makes you down to 3 Pokémon each right?
Max:Yeah Huh
Bonnie:We can't win
Max:Yes we can
Bonnie:His right we deserve to Be behind bars
Max:I know
Red:Why don't you two make a fresh start release all your Pokémon & wait till you turn 30 and the ones who want to join you for your new adventure will how about it?
Max & Bonnie:Yeah!
Max and Bonnie throw out there remaining Pokémon and stomp on there poke balls realising them.
Ref:Does the match go to the Ravenna's?
Max & Bonnie:Yes!!!!
Red:Now you two do as you wish I must speak with Squishy.*time skip to words*
Red:Squishy get Z 2 one of you will watch Max while the other watch's Bonnie How is up to you but I must get back the second battle is starting soon huh?
Kawie:Finally made it hope we didn't miss red's first battle
Red:you did guys but let's hurry back okay?
Mellow:Yeah (was she on the elite chapter well if not She's the cool if yes where was she?)Word count:452+332=784
Word count for part 1:332
Word count for part 2:452
Word count both parts:784
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Red Ravenna's revenge [BOOK 0]
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