Rising Dawn

Rising Dawn: Chapter One

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Chapter One - Before the Transfer

In New York City..........

It's a beautiful radiant summer day on a Saturday afternoon. My sisters Monica, Miranda, and myself was with our friends Heidi Berwick and Debby Underwave, whom we have known since we were babies.

We're all out at the beach with its light brown sand under our feet, it's lovely crystal blue water making waves, and the sincere looking guys running past us.

"Hello, earth to Madison." Heidi stated with a laugher in her voice. The kind of laugh that would make anyone would want to kill just to hear it.

I looked at her with sadness in my eyes, "Oh, I'm sorry was I staring out in space again?" I kinda do that sometimes.

Heidi is so elegant with her long black curly hair, huge attractive light blue eyes, wearing a bikini top the color of hot pink with some black lines in it, and the skirt the same way as the top but slanted down on the right side; with nice black sandals on her feet, and an ankle bracelet that is engraved with her name on it and is linked with a sterling silver chain that hooks it altogether.

"What is wrong with you? You haven't been yourself all day long." She asked with longing in her eyes.

Looking at my sister for help, it was that moment my heart felt like it was going to fall out on ground. I opened my mouth and that was when my sister Monica touch me on my arm to stop me and looks Heidi in the eye, "She is sad because we found out last night that we are moving to Red Stone Valley, North Carolina."

Debby with her long curly pink hair that is half up half down, dark blue eyes, wearing a tank top that goes around the neck and ties behind the back. Which is purple with black and red dots on it and blue jean shorts that seem like they been cut from a pair of pants; and purple flip flops in her hands.

Debby turns to me and my sisters with a bitter look that was so strong. That made me feel like my whole body was going to start shaking as she asked us. "Is this for real? You have to be joking."

"Yes, this is for real. We leave tomorrow." My sisters and I say at the same time.

Monica, Miranda, and me Madison always having to do, say, and have the same things. Even though we also like adding our own styles, this time wouldn't be one of them you see, Monica has dark purple hair that is shaved on one side and long on the other, gray eyes, pixie shape body, cute face, wearing a blue bikini. Miranda's pink and black hair, blue-green eyes, model shape body, camera loving face, wearing a red bikini. Me with my hot pink and red hair, blue-green eyes, like my sisters I have a sporty model shape body, model like face, and wearing a lime green bikini. See we are all wearing the same things different colors but still bikinis.

Sorry, I change topic sometimes when I'm trying to get other things off my mind. Any ways back to the real story at hand. Where was I, oh yeah.

On the way to Monica's car that she got this summer for her 18th birthday. Which is sky blue on the outside, on the inside you have 5 sets that are covered with skull set covers, the steering wheel matchies the sets, the car radio as a lot of music but it is nothing like the KIA soul. On the way to the car she was telling Heidi and Debby why we had to move, "Listen the reason we are moving is because daddy got a new job in Red Stone Valley, so we have to move there. If we don't daddy could lose his job."

When we got in the car, Miranda uttered to herself, "It's not going to be easy." Everyone looked at her with such shock in their eyes because she was not known to talk she is more known as someone who acts first then asked questions. So, she started over, "it's not going to be easy making new friends and trusting people with our secrets about our family. Anyone of them could be our enemy or is someone whom works for our enemy."