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Jamal: Okay first i was walking home and saw a bag on the sidewalk so I picked it up and found money inside it so I took home and told Daquan and Tyrone. About two days later, they attempted to rob me and I killed them. Then the next day these people who had the money pulled up on me and talked to me so I killed them as well and this is where we are at now
Jamal's mother: YOU DID WHAT TO YOUR FRIENDS????!!?!??!!!!!!
Jamal's Father: we have to call the police
Jamal: No you can't. Please don't
Jamal: I'll get rid of the gun
Jamal: *grabs gun out of his mother's hand*
Jamal: *walks out the room*
Jamal: *in head* *i already know they are gonna call the cops while I'm gone so is it the time? Yes it is*
Jamal: *tear runs down cheek*

Jamal runs back in the room crying shooting his mother and Father.

Jamal: I think this is my fate? You said no matter what fate leads you to what you need to do. This is it, I love you two.

Jamal kills his father and mother while crying but his little brother heard him.

Junior: what's that noise?

Junior goes into Jamal's room and sees his mom and dad.

Junior: Mom? Dad?
Jamal: *talking while crying* they're gone 
Junior: *cries* we have to call the police
Jamal: NO!!
Junior: Why not?...............Is that a gun next to you? Did you do this?
Jamal: *silence*
Junior: WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU??!!?!!!!?!?!?!?!??
Jamal: Junior...................
Junior: ?
Jamal: I'm sorry 😔
Junior: NO!!

Junior tries to run out of the room but gets shot and falls in the hallway.

Jamal: WHAT THE H**L IS WRONG WITH ME!?!????!!!!?????!

Jamal places gun up to head and cries.
One minute later
BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TO BE CONTINUED

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