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⚡ℝ𝕖𝕧𝕚𝕖𝕨 𝕠𝕟 𝔼𝕡𝕚𝕡𝕙𝕒𝕟𝕚𝕔 𝕓𝕪 𝕋𝕦𝕣𝕟𝕤 𝕓𝕪 @-𝕣𝕦𝕨𝕚𝕟𝕩⚡

⚡That is a review on the splendid book "Epiphanic by Turns" by -ruwinx!⚡

Score 9 out of 10

First and foremost, let's commence analyzing the book cover, which is the cardinal element of the story. The book cover is ideally suiting the book's genre and utmost emulating to the vibes it oozes of, besides granting the reader a couple of Easter eggs like the main genre, somehow the heroine (Nova)'s appearance how to depict her. In addition to these Easter eggs, the ambiance is also playing a major role. Moreover, there aren't any flaws about the book cover.

Second, the synopsis is rewarding the new reader what we are up to anticipate, besides assimilating the crucial information about the book and what is the heroine up to. You are bestowing the reader with a sufficient quantity of information, which is another plus.

The characters are indubitably likeable and controversially diverse along colourful as it is the reader's choice whom they could sympathize with more throughout the journey. Nova seems to be most likeable, in my humble opinion. She has such a powerfully abstract and down-to-earth development along Michael. Nicah is also another intriguing and well-polished addition, in spite of his haughtiness and having a sophisticatedly debatable perspective.

The characters' introduction in their debut scenes is promisingly delivered out. There is nothing against it, which is an additional plus for your mesmerizing book.

The flow of the words, besides the vocabulary usage is beyond serene and well-constructed. You are describing, even the most intimate details adequately great.

I have been oblivious about the piece of fiction's title until we descended to this topic. It is fantastically original and emulating to its style for a fantasy work.

Nothing is perfect and nothing can be just purely flawless. Let's descend to the sole cons I have spotted which are incredibly ineludible.

Even though there is abundance of well-structured and lacquered sentences with a smooth flow, yet the grammar and punctuation mistakes are the worst foes and being exceptions.

Here are stark examples:

Yes thank you- When you are answering with either "yes" or "no" along "thanks" or "thank you", don't miss that comma between your emphatic response and your gratitude.

Hey, what's the rush. - what's the rush? (Since there is that word "when", "what", "how" and "why", it is correct to replace that full stop with a question mark.)

Let the game begin- There is a missing punctuation mark, which is a full stop.

Well I'm not going to – Every time, whenever a character's line commences with "Well", subsequently you shouldn't forget to put a comma.

"Haa, you don't need..." – Adding more vowels than once is grammatically incorrect. Just remove that one "a".

"Aaah whatever"- Not only you forgot to add a comma between "Aaah" and "whatever" along a full stop in the end of the train of thought of Nicah, but also as I mentioned in the previous example to not add multiple vowels like "Oh", "Ah", "Uh" and "Eh".

"Yet he made no move to pick it up." – There is a missing comma after "Yet".

"Why would I have wings, silly"- Since this sentence is a question, there is something missing. It is a question mark after "silly".

"You see, When Nova was a child..."- Even if "when" is still after the first word in a sentence, it shouldn't be capitalized at all.

"No, no that's not what I meant,"- Since "no" is repetitive, there is only one thing missing and it is a comma before "that's.

"Well then, all that's left is for you to sign the papers,"- Another absent comma especially between "Well" and "then".

"You?! You're the CEO?!"- It is perplexing if it is either an exceedingly sharp brief sentences or pointing out the question. Just get rid of the exclamation mark of them.

"Nana I thought you weren't ..." – Regardless of the addressed character's title, name or nickname, the comma is a must, even between "Nana" and the word after it.

"So you needn't worry about her..."- Regardless if your new sentence commences with "All of a sudden", "Miraculously", "Suddenly", "So" and so forth, the comma is a must again.

"Do you have to be this stubborn every time?!"- As I have mentioned above in the previous few examples for the additional punctuation marks, get rid of one of these that are far cry from useful to highlight the character's potential question or sharp utterance.

"No thank you." – The comma is missing there, even if the response is far cry from positive.

"Oh hell no."- Even if your character is uttering "Ah", "Eh", "Uh" or "Oh", it is exceedingly required a comma.

"Ohh don't tell me..."- A futile additional syllable "h" along a comma are the both traps for this sentence as in the examples above, where I have mentioned the same issue can be found and varnished.

"Hmph, that's fine I guess,"- Even if you are resuming the character's line with "I guess" in the end of it, the comma mustn't be neglected at all.

"Ohh thank goodness, you're fine."

Last but not least, I am genuinely fond of your book as it can play out as a spectacularly phenomenal and eye-catching movie by being a stark adaption, howsoever, these mistakes are supposed to be varnished so that to not repulse and greatly bewilder the readers. Furthermore, you would have had the chance to obtain the full final score solely either if there weren't any mistakes or just a handful of.

Don't get me wrong! I candidly enjoy and love your work, nevertheless, the more mistakes are being highlighted by either the reviewer or the reader as I play the both roles, more your score is unceasingly diminishing, even if everything else is excellent like character development, flow, title, book cover and the aesthetics.

Anyway it was a gargantuan pleasure reading and reviewing your story! Thank you for your extreme patience and discipline as I am genuinely apologizing for taking longer than expected!

A brief note to the other writers, who are waiting for their books to be analyzed:

I am going to postpone some reviews as it is depending on how enormous the book is, besides how chaotically hectic is my life out of Wattpad and my motivation! Thank you!