Preventing A Disaster

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This is when khannas got to know about avni's past during shweta-prakash wedding anniversary &they humiliated her in front of the guests

Here, AvNeil fell in love during riya- neil wedding functions& avni trusted neil so told him about her past& he promised her to get justice

They manipulated riya to be the run away bride& avneil get married

Other changes are in the scenes which you will notice while reading

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Neil was on his way home late at night after being successful in his sting operation to catch pandit& dwm
They are sent to jail while neil rescued the girls who were gonna be trapped in human traficking too

(actually i wanted to finish dwm& pandit's chapter so made this change)

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Khanna mansion-

Bebe was humiliating avni for being illegitimate whereas she was trying to prove her point in front of everyone

A-dwm ko sirf meri maa baap ka khoon karne ki saza mili h bebe
Lekin usne toh muje bhi maarne ki koshish kari, uski saza?
Mera pura bachpan jo chin gaya, uski saza?
Usne kabhi mera naamkarann nahi hone dia, uski saza?
Aur aaj bhi kisi ko mera mangalsutra nahi nazar ara
Par mere maathe ka kalank sabko nazar ara h- ese kalank jisme meri koi galti hi nahi h

B-muje tere aasu nazar aate h
Par agar tere aasu sacche h toh bhi men ye nahi bhool sakti ke jis aurat ne tujhe janam dia h usse samaaj characterless kehta h

Sh-aur haa
Tumhe humari family ki fiqr karne ki zarurat nahi h
Kyuki tumhe toh pta hi nahi h ke family hoti kya h

Characterless aurat ki aulaad
Im sure ke tumhe pita ke alawa bhi unke kai admiyo se relation rahe honge

Nk 😭😭😭

A-mummyji aap mujse umar men badi h par iska ye matlab nahi h ke aap meri maa ke baare men kuch bhi bolti jaaye

Jab tak baat meri thi toh mene sun liya par men apni maa ke against kuch nahi sunungi (sternly)
Lets leave neela maa

Nk 😭😭😭

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Pareikh house-

Neela& ali were consoling a broken avni
Though she had taken a stand for herself in front of everyone, she was really broken from inside

Al-avni isme neil ki koi galti nahi h

A- ali usne mujse kaha tha ke wo muje gift dene wala h
Aur aaj jo gift usne diya h na, usse men zindagibhar yaad rakhungi

Nk 😭😭😭

(Here ali does love avni but has accepted that its 1sided so he didnt get trapped in riya& shweta's plan)

Avni went in her room& removed all her accessories
She tried to remove her mangalsutra but failed
She recollected neil's words-

"Har tooti cheez jodi ja sakti h, phir chahe wo mangalsutra ho ya dil
Aur tumhara dil na toote uske zimmedari meri"

She sobbed terribly- all her childhood wounds which neil had healed with his care& love had been refreshed all over again

A(to hirself)-kaha ho tum neil
Aaj jab muje tumhari sabse zyada zarurat thi toh tum they hi nahi

Aman& neela console her& avni ties rakhi to aman

(Aman is negative)

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