Ripple (The REWRITE for Ninetails in Naruto! Oh Well!)

Chapter 9

(Me adding an explanation or my own little input )

(Just normal ol' parentheses)
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3rd Person POV (unedited)

"Hyuuga-San?" The only response Inoichi received was a disgruntled grumble, and he didn't know why he's expected anything more. A Hyuuga'd been called in to examine the Fox-creature (F-458 unidentified, officially- not like anyone took it seriously outside of professional settings). Physical examinations concluded that the creature had no wounds or other medical problems, and sensory-type shinobi strongly suggested that something was wrong within the creature's chakra systems. If the Hyuuga determined it was safe, Inoichi would be allowed to scope within its mind again.

"It seems that the chakra paths are branching out, volumes are changing much like humans' do with development, except this is far more on an explosive scale. It's safe to assume the sudden violent increase in chakra would put strain on its body."

  Inoichi's brows scrunched closer together "But, why? How? What would warrant something like this?"

"Human chakra-levels increase through development, either naturally slowly, or faster through training. Civilian levels are obviously lower, and animal levels even more so. F-458's levels are unprecedented in any fox's ever documented before," he hesitated for a moment, "The chakra looks almost boiling at this point in.. its' development- it almost burns to look at."

That was concerning to hear to say the least. Inoichi wasn't sure what to respond to that, so he just nodded and tried not to sound shaky, "I- Alright then, a written report will definitely need to happen, along with further examination. Would you say it would be safe for me to enter it's mind?"

"I would personally advise against it, Yamanaka-Sama." The Inuzuka girl in charge of monitoring the creature decided to speak up.

"As would I, F-458's chakra looks violent-"

" -And it's exhibiting defensive body-languages. It's a good idea to carefully monitor it, something seems to be happening in the creature's subconscious mind."

Inoichi nodded, he could be unprofessional about coping with his job some time later (everything just seems to get progressively worse). "Alright, continue delicate monitoring of the creature for now, a written report should be expected from both of you some time within the next few days, yes?"

Both shinobi nodded, before going back to their respective tasks. Inoichi mentally sighed in relief, he always amazes himself how he can sound so authoritative. GoddamnitInoichijustholditdownnowandyoucanrewardyourselfwithsomebeerlatertonight
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"If you're waiting for the waiter, doesn't that make you the waiter?" A crack signifies that something has broken, whether it was the wooden table or his nose remained unclear.

"For fuck's sake Daiki, this is why you shouldn't consume hard liquor!"

"Aw come on Akio, I think he's better with a bit of alcohol in his system. He was always smarter with it in his veins instead of blood, yeah?"

"The first guy to experience death must've left shook-"

"What? I literally can't" another crack signified the breaking of another inanimate object, or a nose.
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Hey! See it's still April.....the 30th........at 11pm-
but a least I made it right?

Sorry for the short trashy update, it feels like assignments just get longer as the weeks go by.

Also, is it spelled "Hyuuga" or "Hyuga"??