A Twilight Saga Poem

Hey guys! Wrote this for a contest ( with help from someone really dear to me ). I don't write poetry often so be nice. Please review and tell me what you think! Constructive criticism welcome!

When all is crazy, you escape

To a different landscape

You dive right in well prepared

For what the lovely pages bare

Right from the start you will see,

The lion and the lamb are truly meant to be.

He chooses to hide no longer

And shows he's her knight in sparkling armor.

Just as their love starts to bloom,

Something more sinister starts to loom.

When you think nothing can go wrong,

thunder strikes and evil comes along.

As she packs spitting lies,

You prepare for the sad goodbye.

Our lamb wakes up in a daze,

Remembering the events of the past days.

As the monster lingers by,

She runs off towards her mother's cry.

To die in the place of someone she loves

She's lured where she's thrown and shoved.

As her bones easily crack

She fears becoming a blood lust snack.

So as the venom consumes her heart

Her family-to-be rips the predator apart.

With smoke filling the air all around

The fire rages in herself, pain making her drown.

A kiss of death to withdraw the venom

Sacrifice bore, another reason she loves him.

Still her world slips and fades to black

despite the Cullens having her back

The relief felt when she opens her eyes

He's still there, by her side.

While she's still amazed she hadn't died,

She can feel his distance and his lies

Walking boot and dress, she doesn't look bad

She comes down the stairs to him and her dad.

They go to prom to dance the night away

But a wolf will greet them before end of day.

Every word touches your heart with drama and laughter.

Only 3 more books to happily ever after.