yona of the dawn MY VERSION

A Normal day

Iku- soo : i know that u r skocked but that's the truth there is a lot i have to tell about what i heard from the gods.
But 1st let everyone be awake
( inside Ik-soo's hut everyone is awake except for zeno who is still sleeping deeply while kija is trying to wake him up desperately. And shin- ah is helping kija wake zeno.)
Kija: Oouryo....oouryo......Zeno. Wake up . How long on earth r u planning to sleep? Shin-ah help me !!!!!try to wake him up .
Shin-ah : catches zeno's collar and shakes him VIGOROUSLY.
Kija:(nervously)  shin-ah if u want to wake him  don't shake him harshly.  It can kill him . zeno is young and is not powerful like other dragons.  Just call  him out loud.
shin-ah: but steel body
Ao: pukyuu
Jayeha: what's this ? What r u all doing ? Trying to wake zeno? U too Ao. What! U r stuffing nuts in his mouth. That's not good . Ao he can't eat it  like this Ao ur wasting food and zeno is not ill.
Kija: jayeha where did u go off to this morning. I greeted u when i woke up but u left without saying good morning . Did  u forget that we all  r dragon brothers?
Jayeha: no i did not forget. I was just so sleepy and in a hurry to catch a beast for breakfast as yoon told me to do.
Yooon : ( at the fireplace making breakfast . SMILES . ) yes it's going to be a feast . (turning arond) i don't see yoona here ....
Jayeha: i took her with me this morning for some specific purpose . (Falls down)
Hak : (irritated) shut up droopy eyes!!!
Yoon What purpose!!!
Jayeha : just kidding hak !!!
Hak : i will kill u one day. By the way where is the princess?
Zeno : (smiling and cheerefull with a stick in his hand) Miss has gone to practise the sword mister . she left early morning . she is practising the sword. Zeno shall learn it too. Whoosh whoosh . ( moves the stick around)
Kija: zeno stop moving that stick!!! U will hurt yourself . where did u get it f from? Btw how long have u been awake. Did u get up early this morning ?
Zeno : zeno always wakes up early . zeno is a good boy.  Stick was on ground.( Smiling and cheerful)
Jayeha , kija , and shin ah are surprised. ( they think zeno is weird)
Suddenly dooor opens yoona and ik-soo enter
Zeno : ( runs towards yoona smiling and cheerefull)  good morning miss
Yoona : (smiles) good morning everyone!!!
Ik- soo: Ah such aroma . As expected from yoon's cooking.
Yoon: breakfast is ready. U five beasts (  including thunder beast ) come get ur brekfast . ik-soo and princess u too.
Yoona : ( still thinking ) soo- woon's mind is being controlled.!!!( said by ik-soo)
Zeno : so good food !!! Ryt seiryo?
Shinah: nods .
Kija: sea weeds!!!!!
Hak. : 2nds pls.
Jayeha : me too. After i worked hard to get breakfast.
Yoona : me too. I am hungry .
Yoon : wait wait !!! 2nds coming up !! Get in a line !!!
Everyone : yes mother .
Yoon : i am not your mother!!! geez!!!
Ik- soo :  (in mind) What a lively bunch of people !!  Smiles.

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Also i am sorry to publish this part late ( actually it got deleted ) i had to rewrite it !!!