Eh.. I dunno

Petal Boi

     His lips folded into an unsettling, yet far too sincere smile to be considred friendly, giving off an aura of an otherworldly being. Blank, blinding eyes seemingly as dark as the night sky, despite such a shade of white it hurt to look at, pierced the souls of those who dared to gaze upon them. They held no emotion, yet told a story of their own, sending waves of sorrow through Anthony's veins.

     Within a flash, he was gone, leaving a small trail of what appeared to be rose petals in his path, seeming to somehow pahse through the wall. Anthony could not bring himself to get out of the comfort of his own bed, staring wide-eyed at where the odd figure had one been, eyes wide with shock.

This is just a couple of paragraphs from a story that I had written a few chapters to awhile back. It wasn't exactly like this, but I decided to look into har far I've come with writing and try to salvage the story a bit and re-create a few chapters. I've also been thinking of making this into a book on here, but I'm really hesitant about it, since I've never shown my work to anyone. I'm probably talking-- no, writing to myself right now, but to those who do see this, feel free to tell me what 'cha think, don't be shy when it comes to constructive critisicsm, I'll need all the help I can get if I'm looking to do something with writing (or just tell me if you'd like to see this made into a book/be shared here).

Toodles.  (っ･ω･)っ