Jail Bait [Mashton] [Book 1]

What If...

What if I Re-Write Jail Bait guys?!?!?!

Not like change it all, but make it like 1000000000000 times better. Would you re-read the adventure of Ashton and Michael (with a very large slice of Calum and Luke or Cake) as they try and have a relationship while being Jail Bait??

And yes I do know that it is now DECEMBER AND I SAID THAT COMPASS WOULD START IN NOVEMBER, GET OFF OF MY CASE PLEASE! I'm sorry, but school is annoying, but I'm out for two weeks, give or take, (more like until the 5 of January, I think) and I also haven't written much because I don't know what to write really. I feel like Jail Bait just kinda sucked, and that it ended really bad, so I've been thinking about other stories and well I don't know.

I just feel like Jail Biat sucks ass.

So would you guys like if I rewrote it? It might end up being longer even, and better written, because I did a really bad job when writing this story, and I'm sorry that you guys put up with it, because you shouldn't have. 

Please give your thoughts guys, please. And if I get feed enough feed back by midnight Pacific Time, (It's 8:45 when I'm writing this) I'll start working on it as soon as I can.