So I read comments and I got a personal message that abh story bohot negetive horahi hai and all.
To all those comments, maine introduction mai likha tha👇👇
JOH LOG MUJHE JANTE HAI WOH YEH BHI JANTE HAI KI, STORY YAHA WAHA GHUMEGI, TWIST AND TURN LEGI, DUNIYA KA CHAKKAR LAGAYEGI PARR USKO DESTINATION PE LAANE KA KAAM MERA HAI. AUR WOH MAI ZAROOR KARUNGI!
So guys trust me, mai story ko negetive ya sad nahi banaungi...
But at the same time mai Shehnaaz ka character change nahi karungi. Period.
She is a strong independent business woman from a rich background. Woh koi gold digger ya weak ladki nahi hai.
Lets get that straight please!
Secondly, agar suspense end karna hi hai... Woh toh mai next update mai 1000 words mai bhi kar sakti hu aur uske next mai end bhi. Try me!
But this will spoil all the buildup joh humne itne time se banaya hai. Like-
Teddy kon hai?
Shehnaaz ka plan kya hai?
Teddy ka plan kya hai?
Sid ka plan kya hai?
Why is Shehnaaz doing that?
Flashback kya hai?
Sid kyu nahi pehchanta?
Nikita kyu hai?
This will leave so many loop holes. I hope tum sab samajh rahe ho what I mean to say.
Apart from that joh emotions tumhe actual suspense khulte vakt feel honge woh iss sudden revealation mai nahi aayenge.
Maine bohot mehnat ki hai iss story pe, in leaving hints all around... Harr ek word dhyan se likhna padta hai, it is really diffucult. Woh bhi waste hojayegi.
But again, the ball is in your court, you order and I will wrap it up in two parts I promise.
Leave down your comments. Okay byee!
PS- This part will get deleted when I post the next part whatever it will be😌
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Ajeeb Dastaan Hai Yeh
Ficção GeralSTAND ALONE TOTAL FICTION Sidharth and Shehnaaz are two fashion designers and rivals. Thats it. Jump in to find out more! it has mystery, confusion and a lotttt of it! What defines the story best? Its title- Ajeeb Dastaan Hai Ye!❤ So jump into it...
