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Hi i'm Ruby. Well today's my 15th birthday and guess what my present is? Cleaning out the garage and an old porcelain doll. The doll was old and creepy. It had black eyes, pale white skin, a black dress, and long black hair. And a face to make the hair on your neck stand up.
"Hey little freak, you live in here so i don't have to look at you blood- curtalling face", i said as i threw the wierd doll in a tresure box and locked it.
I guess that was a smart move back there, the thing was CREEPY. I got the key to the tresure box and hid it were nobody could find it. I rode my skate board up to an old well that was atlest 30 feet deep.I took a deep breath and threw it in. I didn't leave till i heard a splash. When i did, I realized i had been standing there for atleast 5 minutes. I knew it wasn't possible to find that key under so much water.
I knew i was over exagerating when i did that move back there, but there was something about that doll that just dosen't feel right. It looked to sinister to be a doll.
*Back at home*
It was around 3:00 when i got back. My parents were at work and wouldn't be off till late. I went upstairs after i made myself some nutella sandwich, and when i opend the door, i nearly had a heart attack!
The doll was sitting on my bed WET with THE KEY in her hands! I put my sandwich on my desk and walked over to the doll. I grabbed the doll and took it downstairs. I Got a hammer and craked the dolls head open and threw it away. I ignored my nutella sandwich, for i was too scared to eat. Instead, i just decited to take a shower. I turned on the shower and started washing my face. All the sudden, i heard the bathroom door creek open!
"Who is this?", i aksed with shampoo in my eyes.
"Depends.. who do you think i am?", it said in a wierd sratchy voice.
"Um, mom?...", i asked curiosly.
"No..", it replied.
"Dad?..", i answerd.
"Wrong", it answerd.
"Listen! who ever you are! you better leav-", all the sudden i wa cut off by it's annoying laugh.
"Lets play a game, i'll let your parents and your little sister live if you survive tonight..", it laughed.
"THAT ISN'T FUNNY!", i said as i flund open the shower , but saw nothing....
I looked around the bathroom, then i saw the DOLL sitting on the toilet seat.
"What did you come in here to take a shit or to scare the fizz out of me?!",i jeered knowing that it wouldn't answer back.
"THIS ISN'T FUNNY!", it yelled mockingly.
My heart nearly stopped. The doll was going to kill me tonight!
