NaruMaru - Me Rewriting my old crappy Naruto x OC Fanfic

A shinobi's Downfall

Four more years had passed, and now Mizuko was a fine nin at the age of twelve. Her hair had grown out very long, and her eyes had only grown brighter. Her skills were maybe even aligned with the great Sasuke, who was at this point the same age as her.

Mizuko had learned to control her chakra extremely well, considering she was constantly training it to perfection. 

Mizuko figured out that her affinity for chakra was fire-type. She immediately picked up moves such as the Fireball Jutsu and the Pheonix Flower Jutsu and locked them into perfection as well. 

She was very swift on her feet, and her only disadvantage was her emotions.

Due to Mizuko growing up in the Anbu, her sweet personality was slowly fading.

The more time she spent in the Anbu, the bleaker her life became.

More and more time she spent training, and less and less time she spent having fun.

Mizuko went out on her first missions, contributing as much as she could in wiping out her opponents, which she did extremely well, with no regrets.

Her comfort in this situation was that every person had done something bad to be assassinated. It was a simple way of thinking, but somehow it compensated for brutally killing them inside of her head.

Mizuko was placed on a team. consisting of Kishi, Nako, and herself. Nako was a young boy, two or three years older than herself. He specialized in Genjutsu, while she herself focused on Ninjutsu. Kishi specialized in Taijutsu.

Mizuko had no sympathy for those that she killed. Although Kishi's bright personality kept her from completely fading into the darkness, she was still becoming duller and duller by the year. She was constantly training and trying to figure out new ways to use her Jutsu's, and how to learn new ones. She was always discussing how to improve with the other members and her teammates, and sometimes even sought out Lord Danzo's advice. For the past year, Mizuko had been working on her own Jutsu, perfecting every single piece of it that she could. Due to her affinity being partly wind as well, it was easier for her to develop combined Jutsus.

Although making your own Jutsu is extremely difficult, and requires absolute work and attention, Mizuko finally got it.

Her move was a combination of Fire Style: Burning Ash and Wind Style: Blade of Wind. She used her technique to swiftly punch a very tightly packed fist of air into her enemies, but her move had a twist. This wasn't just air she was punching in, it was smoke. The smoke invaded their body, killing them from the inside out if used hard enough. This move could also be used defensively, as it could spray out a wave of pressured smoke that blinded the opponents.

She finally decided to name her Jutsu Mizu Style: Meteor Smoke; She hoped that this Jutsu would give her power over her enemies, and make her a renowned member of the Anbu. Because of Mizuko not really having much of a goal in life, due to her being given to the society at such a young age, she did not know what she was meant to do in her life. The only vague sense of goal that she had in her mind was to become one of the best members of the Anbu and acquire Danzo's approval.

Because of this goal, Mizuko would not let anyone get in her way, except Kishi. Kishi was like such a mother figure to her that Mizuko would never want to get in front of her. She always wanted to surpass her because of the role that she played in her life. 

Mizuko, Kishi, and Nako had bonded more than ever during this time, taking on any missions that were thrown at them, Kishi mainly being the leader due to her age and her being wise beyond her years. Kishi's hair had now grown to at least twice it's length since she was thirteen. With Kishi now being seventeen, she was very powerful in her knowledge of taijutsu and weaponry. She only focused on her taijutsu and scrolls. Nako had medium length, brown hair, and grey eyes. He was very talented in the realm of genjutsu, possessing jutsu's such as the Demonic Flute: Dream Sound Chain and the Temple Of Nirvana Technique. Mizu's abilities excelled in her custom Ninjutsu and her affinity for fire and wind. Mizu's swiftness and her battle strategies put her at the top of her class when it came to her age group.