• Mej magulo ang time stamps
• Madalas magtime jump
• Walang kwenta ang author
• Mej magulo ang story (baka)
• Fan ako ng Ben&Ben kaya ginamit ko ang names nila. And story lang po ito, hindi yung totoong story ng band and characteristics ng mga nuggets.
• Tamad ang author
• Puro kwento lang, walang masyadong sinasabi dahil A.U dapat to na hindi natuloy
• First time koto kaya pasensya
• Walang taong perpekto, lahat nagkakamali
• You can leave your comments and suggestions about sa story. Thank You sa support, Labyu all. See you all soon, Puhon!
CHARACTERS
• Miguel Benjamin Guico
• Paolo Benjamin Guico
• Agnes Reoma
• Andrew De Pano
• Patricia Lasaten
• Toni Muñoz
• Jam Villanueva
• Poch Baretto
• Keifer Cabugao
• Karelle Anne Bulan
• Kiel Janmariv Mamauag
• Val Guico (mom of the benjamins)
• Mr. Bulan (dad of Karelle)
• Workmates