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Assalamu alaikum!
I am really sorry. There's been a mistake. Actually like mentioned in chapter one, Zohal lost her parents 13 years ago. It was some really bad editing. It wasnt her parents that should have been mentioned in some of the chapter. I'll edit it, pls forgive my amateur writings.
And yeah thanx for reading my horrible writing!
My editings are finally completed and I'll divide the parts!
Corrections
1. Zohal's parents are dead.
2. Omar isn't as close with his son.
3. Zohal isn't as accepting as before towards Shehraz.
4. The previously mentioned facts about Nasreen, Mina, Maria and Rahma are deleted. There might be changes in the future.
5. A lot of scenes have been deleted, edited. Between Omar and Zohal. Between Omar and And Shehraz. Even between Zohal and Shehraz.
● There isn't really a big difference in the first 2 chapters. But after that, personalities, attitudes,
Dialogues and etc. Have been changed.
● I have made changes to let them grow. They cant be perfect since the beggining. They're human after all.
● I'll post a family tree for both Fatihs and Wadis for further understanding.
Man..it was such a long editing....Took me 2 whole days I think. Anyways, thanxxxx!
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غير مألو - Unfamiliar
Short StoryA Short Story: A woman who was betrayed. A man who was abandoned. And of course throw a little boy into the mix. Zohal Kabir Wadi and Omar Salim Fatih have their life turned upside down, in one flick of hand. Two amateur parents trying to fit every...
