Today is the day that I take the test. I may be in abnegation but I'm friends with almost all the dauntless, they even brought me dauntless clothes for the choosing day. It's not a dress, considering I hate dresses, it's a tight, black, crop top that shows off my boobs, with black skinny jeans that show off my ass and last but not least black, knee length, leather, high heeled boots. I look hot. I may get beat, but that doesn't stop me from showing off my scars at dauntless. "Beatrice!!" Marcus yells at me from downstairs, "Come down here and leave for the test before I come up there and beat you!" He yelled. If my test administrator is dauntless, then I'll take my abnegation clothes off so that I'm wearing my dauntless clothes. I'm walking by the train tracks waiting for the dauntless to come so that I can run with them, when I feel the tracks start to rumble. I smile to myself and start to run. I was running when all of a sudden, I'm tackled down by the one and only, Zeke pedrad. "Zeke get off of the poor girl, she's wearing a dress." Shauna said. We get back up and automatically start running with the dauntless. "Beatrice come sit with the abnegation, now." Marcus quietly hissed at me as I ran by. "No can do "Marcus"!" I yelled over my shoulder emphasizing the word "Marcus". I heard gasps from the abnegation as the dauntless cheer and laugh. "You'll fit in great at dauntless." Lynn said as everybody else agreed with her. "Who said I wanted To be dauntless, I could chose candor." "What!!!" Everybody in dauntless and abnegation said. "I'm just kidding. Let's just wait and see my test result." I said laughing. "And remember to tell each other what are results are, even if their divergent." Zeke said. We sat there playing never have I ever, pretending to drink, when the all of a sudden, called my name along with Caleb prior and Susan black. I don't look anything like Susan black. She's plain, while I have blonde long wavy hair with red tips. I walk into a room that just to my surprise had a lady from dauntless in it. "Phew" I said as I took my abnegation clothes off. She just looks at me in shock. "So I'm guessing your Tris Eaton?" She asks me. "Yep." I said popping the "p". "Sit down and drink this. It will go into effect in 60 seconded. My name is Tori." I did as she said and all of a sudden I'm in a different room full of mirrors. I walk around admiring myself in the mirrors. When I turn around there's one side with a knife and one side with steak. I choose the knife. All of a sudden a wolf starts running at me, so I stab it, then I'm back in the simulation room. "Congrats, you got dauntless." She said. I smiled and made my way back to the group, putting my abnegation robe back on. "In dauntless stop by the tattoo parlour and come see me. Tori tells me. "Okay." I reply walking out. When I sit back down at the table I realize that they all took the test already. "Alright, Tris you start." Zeke said. (T=Tris, U=Uriah, M=Marlene, L=Lynn)
T-"Dauntless" I said
U-"divergent" Uriah whispered
M-"divergent" Marlene whispered
L-"Dauntless!" Shouted Lynn.
"Are you two still going to pick dauntless?" I asked Marlene and uri. they answered with "duh" and "yeah, I ain't no pansy cake". When I get home, Marcus is there holding his belt. This is going to be a long night. I thought as Marcus whips me.
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Divergent my way
Fanfictionthis is basicly a rewrite of divergent except tris is badass! She's also Marcus's adoptive daughter, while four/Tobias is Andrew and Natalie priors son. Find put who Tris's real dad is in the fan fiction.
