Story - The eternal muse by BiblioWrites
Genre - Teenfiction
Plot: In terms of originality, the story is unique and definitely intriguing. However, the plot seems very slow paced. Five chapters in and I'm still reading about the very same day. I don't know what secret of Katrina's is going to be revealed on her birthday. As a reader, I would suggest you to cut down on some unnecessary information that we come to know from Katrina's perspective. Instead, try to incorporate them through dialogues or real life situations in the book. Remember, actions speak louder than words...literally too. So rather, show don't tell. My score: 3.5/5
Judged by AdriannaRaines3172
Story - Just one favour by Alana2215
Genre - Chicklit
Plot - I don't feel like your story is unique I mean I could literally understand what's going to happen by reading the names of your chapter. You seem to exaggerate things a bit and the story seems a bit too straight forward and please have a look on the choice of your words. Thank you.
Score 2.5/5
Judged by HimangshuKumarPaul
Story - A simple Chaos by Perkygirlll
Genre - Romance
Plot - Alright, let's get settled for the truth. I didn't get a ful insight to your story but by the chapters I read, I must say you didn't do a very neat work there. Try telling your dialogues out loud before you pen them down. The plot isn't unique enough to intrigue interest and carry it through the rest of the story.
All the best for future
My score -3.5/5
Judged by ImSanyukta
Story - Leonardo by Yummychocochick
Genre - Action/Adventure
Plot - Its a cliché plot. I have read a lot of werewolf books and all are pretty nuch the same...I would like if you could bring something innovative and unique even within the boundaries of same plotting. My score - 3/5
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