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Results from theme 1

Last week, you all got the task to create a character in the theme of films. They're all very interesting and amazing to read! I'm sorry it took me this long to actually finish and publish this, I suddenly got really busy. But anyway, I've tried my best to judge them, and here are the results: 

Chalcedoon

Movie choice: Divergent

Originality of the film choice: Really good, especially since there are different factors that have their own qualities, giving someone who wants to make a character for it clear guidelines, for the backstory as well as for the personality.

Is it detailed enough: It's definitely detailed enough. I really enjoyed the fact that you took the time to develop the family as a whole and incorporated them into the character, same with the friends. It gives the character an extra depth to it.

Does the character fit in the universe: Yes, I definitely think it does. The faction is worked out in detail, the movie's idea is explained a little for a bit of exposition for the character and it's overall a really great and detailed character.

Could anything have been done better: No, I don't think so. Everything is really clear, it's explained well and the character sounds great. Maybe, if someone was going to nitpick, you could've tried to find a picture of what the character would look like or describe their looks a little more, but for the rest, everything looks great.

Overall score: 9/10

nope0nope

Movie choice: X-Men

Originality of the film choice: Pretty original, especially since there are a lot of ways to go with mutations. I personally think that the character being immortal is a little bit of a cliché, but it's still a really good take, especially with how he found out how he was immortal.

Is it detailed enough: Yes, it definitely is. At first glance it was a bit confusing to see how everything was structured, but it made sense as I started to read it. I really liked the character's backstory and experiences.

Does the character fit in the universe: It feels a little off sometimes, but it's a really good fit. The backstory and the hobbies are a nice touch that add something fun to the character.

Could anything have been done better: I don't think so, no. Everything was pretty good, maybe the handedness was a bit much, but overall it looked great.

Overall score: 9/10

petrichor_idyllic

Movie choice: Maze Runner

Originality of the film choice: It's, to me, quite an original choice, especially since the universe is pretty well-developed and there is a pretty good reason for everything.

Is it detailed enough: Yes, it absolutely is. It's well structured, although a bit confusing at times, but it's really well-detailed. I like that you made a character that was there before the movie started, so he actually had a chance to develop.

Does the character fit in the universe: Yes, especially since the character was introduced before the movie began, if that makes sense.

Could anything have been done better: No, I don't really think so. Everything looks really good, it's detailed, the character fits in the universe, it's just really good

Overall score: 9.5/10

hiba_moktar123

Movie choice: Descendants

Originality of the film choice: Really original, I honestly wouldn't have thought of it.

Is it detailed enough: Yes, it looks good, I think the sign and height and stuff are the little things that make it fun to read. It could have been a little more detailed at some parts, like I would've liked to see a bit more about how he got his somniphobia and stuff, but overall it looks really good.

Does the character fit in the universe: Yes, I think the character fits pretty well in the universe. He has a pretty good backstory, the involvement of canon characters is nice and it feels like a good, three-dimensional character.

Could anything have been done better: Maybe explain a bit more aboutthe relationships with the people the character likes less, and try to break up the sentences a bit more. Otherwise, it's a good character.

Overall score: 8/10

NOTE: If I forgot any of you, I am so so so sorry, please tag me at your character and I'll put them in here, I'm sorry