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Results from theme 2

Chalcedoon

Is the character detailed enough: Yes, absolutely. The character has definitely got enough details and things that make them feel like a three dimensional person.

Is his job explained well enough: I think so, yeah. It's clear what he does, though you do have to look a bit for the part where it's actually explained.

Were the questions answered: Yes, though the answers were sometimes a little hard to find. I actually like that because then you really have to read everything instead of just skimming over the character and you kind of get to know them.

Are the backstory and other things detailed enough: It's definitely detailed enough. The backstory answered all of the questions, the relations with family and friends and of course Sofia are well developed and even the place where he works was described in a fair amount of detail.

Could anything have been done better: I think I said this last time as well (and please tell me if I didn', then I'll edit this part), but it's a little nicer for me, personally, to see pictures of how they look instead of a description. Now that of course is just something I like better, but the descriptions are also pretty good.

Overall score: 8.5/10

hiba_moktar123

Is the character detailed enough: Yes, I think the character is detailed enough. It does feel like a few small things are missing, but that could just be me. I like that you explained how other people can see him because of his personality and that you took the time to put in people such as a rival, friends and family. I also like the small part where you explain his phobias, it's a nice detail to me.

Is his job explained well enough: Yes, though it maybe could be better explained. If I see how well developed all the other parts are, it looks a little underdeveloped, if that makes sense.

Were the questions answered: I think most of them are. It's a bit hard to see the different parts where they were explained, but I think I missed the last two questions.

Are the backstory and other things detailed enough: It's absolutely detailed enough. The backstory of his childhood and the role of his mother and sister in how he

Could anything have been done better: I'm really sorry if this comes off as rude, but the lack of punctuation bothered me a little bit. Overall it was a really good character, and the town and backstory and relationships are really nice, but it all seems like long sentences without any breaks. Now that does look kinda nice in parts like the Quotes, but in the Backstory there could've been more commas to divide everything up a little and make it easier to read.

Overall score: 8.5/10

NOTE: If I forgot any of you, I am so so so sorry, please tag me at your character and I'll put them in here, I'm sorry