Written Opinions

The end. Sort of.

Imagine a plane. The plane has the words 'Written Opinions' painted on its side. It is from Anneleke Airlines. The plane is flying all peaceful like. The clouds are all fluffy and soft-looking, the kind you fantasize about living on when you are a kid. Then, all of a sudden, the plane starts to go through some bumpy air. The pilot informs the passengers about slight turbulence. Oh wait, it looks like a bit more turbulence will be expected. It is no longer described as 'slight'. The passengers are a bit uncomfortable, but they aren't worrying. The plane glides along for a little while longer after enduring the turbulence. Suddenly, the plane nosedives unexpectedly and plummets to the ground. Everyone screams. They are worrying now. There was no warning. The plane crashes into the ground and there is a big explosion. 'Written Opinions' is now a mess of dead and unconscious bodies, the smell of burning seats, and distorted metal.

Oh hey guys. Why do you look so shocked? Something I said?

This whole update is an author's note type of thing.

Basically.

I'm ending this story.

>>With Ray and Jain mid-conversation?! *

Yes. I mean, no. I mean, yes.

Well, sort of. Ray and Jain will finish that conversation sometime.

I'm not completely ending the story. I'm rewriting it. Because.

Well.

'Cause I'm a perfectionist. And this story does not meet my expectations for what I wanted to write. And didn't you read the beginning? This plane has crashed, my friend. Plane meaning story.

And also because I'm really idiotic.

Like now.

I know that this is a bad idea. But, in this case, a bad idea's not going to stop me.

You hate me right now, I know. :) I'm sorry.

>>You have no idea.

But I will be rewriting Written Opinions. And it will be better. And I will be proud of it. And I will not end up putting it on hold. And I will not end up ending it mid-conversation.

Cause airplanes were meant to FLYyYYYYyyyYyYYYyYYyYYYyyy!!!

Erm.

This story was going downhill from about chapter three. Funny, that's when I finally decided where I wanted to take this story. Funnier (ironically, not hilariously), it didn't go that direction.

Mrph.

So, I am now rewriting Written Opinions and Insolitis.

God, this is a bad idea.

Alright, bye.

Now imagine the plane being taken to a repair shop. All the passengers are being taken to a hospital. This will be fixed. And maybe Anneleke Airlines will give Written Opinions a different color of paint. The pilot didn't like the yellow color much.

*ray and jay were mid conversation when I had the old version up. the old version is still up, but the last five parts were deleted. so technically they aren't mid convo yet and if you're just now reading this then you haven't even met ray yet. so yeah, just to clarify.