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Kris POV
Sometimes it feels like you can never smile again,
Your alone and you don't have a single true friend.
I'm ripping out my soul and causing myself all this pain,
It's slowly making me kill and go insanePeople only act nice when your around,
But truly inside, they want to throw you on the ground.
I'm the only human to be in this small town,
All they see on my face is my frown.But I just don't want to ever close my eyes,
I don't wanna hide from the endless lies.
I just want to rest from this endless nightmare that I can't wake up from,
I really want to take Susie to a dance or prom.But who will ever understand me?
Susie POV
People take me as a terrible abusive girl,
They say when they see me, they want to hurl.
But Kris was the one who brought the light in my life,
The only one who could make me drop down the knife.But who will understand me?
Ralsei POV
I'm the prince of dark without any subjects ,
I never felt like I could have a single object.
Until the day I met the blue cute hero named Kris,
My life was filled with love, happiness and bliss.But who will understand me?
All 3 heroes POV
We shine like burning stars in the sky,
Each with our own abilities to love and cry.
We fight for our family and all our friends,
The fun gangs love and heroic-ness never ends.But who cares if no one understands us?
We still have each other.END
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