First of all, I wanted to sincerily apoligize to all of you since I didn't post for a long time. What I did was is that I typed out my whole story, and now will just paste them onto here, so you guys don't have to wait for long. But what I will need in return is atleast one comment telling me to update. Feel free to ask me to check out your story, and be sure to leave any suggestions. I hope you enjoy! (My story is being edited for mistakes!)
“Whoa....” murmur the girls. A prodigious house portends over them, and they can see it has 5 colossal garages, and a security guard stands waiting by the door. When he contemplates them, he rushes over. He respectfully greets them, and takes their luggage.“Maria will show you around. She’s my daughter.” A beautiful young girl, about 10, ambles from behind him. She’s wearing a plain, crummy white dress. Although the condition of the dress is sloppy, the colourful, crotched flowers look stunning. “I love your flowers. Who made them?” asks Sonu, ever friendly. The girl looks sad, and whispers, “My mom...” Her baby blue eyes begin glistening, and Sonu feels abominable. Maria starts walking towards the magnificent double doors, and her shoulders start trembling, as if she were crying. Her dad- the security guard (John) - looks lost, and sad. Sonu can tell she’s hit a sensitive nerve, and she is ashamed of herself. Somehow, she always ends up doing this.
And I had a question. Should I make the chapters longer?
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6 sisters❌, 6 enemies
Short StoryThis is a tale of six indian sisters, who move to New York. They are ready to face New York together, but what if they become enemies???
