Title is so beautiful one, "blooming hearts" apt for the story. You really related this title to story, its so soothing the love that is blooming. Well done.
Cover(4.5/5)
Cover is so beautiful, the font is nice, the title is clearly seen. But Samaina picture is behind, the title covered the whole page, so I think you can slightly change the cover, making samaina face in front as many will not recognise it in first look.
Blurb(5/5)
I really appreciate you for this, you really gave a nice description about story. It so beautiful, I really got interest to read it. You even added the characters sketch there which also clarifies the doubts. Good one on Blurb.
Plot(4.5/5)
The plot is awesome and very emotional too. Love blooming between samaina has started slowly, very emotional in the story you describe so well, not more or less it's on the track. I wish the plot goes like this throughout the story without any lag.
Characters(4.5/5)
Good one, you gave character sketch separately in description side not inside the book separately and mentioned two important characters. I suggest you to add characters inside the book too, as it is a long story. It will help the readers to understand while going through chapters.
Grammar(4.5/5)
Your grammar is so good. The way you describe things is beautiful. Somewhere there are few mistakes which is to be corrected. I suggest you to do proofreading once you done with the draft, it may help and also give gap between few paragraphs you explain, in some places there is no linespace. Otherwise all good.
Flow(5/5):-
The flow of the story is so good, I really liked it from Prologue to last chapter, there is no lag in between. You explained even the small things clearly without rushing up. Its so good. I hope it goes on like this till the end.
