So I'm going to start changing the way I write my POVs and here is an example:
Yume Nijino: "I can't wait for our performance!"
Kasumi Mahiru: "Same!"
I will instead write it like this-
Yume runs up to Mahiru and explains to her how excited she is for there performance! Mahiru tells Yume she feels the same way to!
Then if I'm going into a POV I'll write
Yume Nijino's POV
Sakuraba Laura POV.
I hope this won't change anything you think of this story. But this is just a update and I'll probably do a up spree because of this 🥰

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Yume's Adventure
Fanfic(I don't own Aikatsu Stars) This is about what happens after Laura leaves and the new S4 with Yume Nijino, Ako Saotome, Mahiru Kasumi, and Haruka Ruka. What will happen?!? There is a mysterious dress... called the galaxy dress. Find out by reading...