Daren x Ofir [Original Story] [English]

Chapter 1

Author's Notes:

Well, it's been a while since the last chapter, I'm very sorry for the delay but as I explained in my recent profile post, I haven't been able to update due to an artistic blockage and lack of inspiration at the time of writing, but now that I have resumed writing I can continue with this as well as create new things from now on!

I have received MANY comments over the months, asking me about the new chapter and that they had hopes that it would update soon, my apologies for the delay (asdasdad) but because of what has already been explained before I couldn't update :( still I appreciate seeing so much interest in what I wrote, that makes me happy since I see interest and that you like it a lot, I hope to bring back interesting things for the future!

It should be said that since the last time I wrote about them, there have been a couple of modifications in this universe since Hiyoko has introduced her own characters in the plot, but here it is only going to explain about Daren and Ofir since I don't have control over the other characters so I can't write about it, I'll tell you the story of Daren and Ofir facing their current state, just as they are now, everything else in the world around them is already in charge of Hiyoko who is the which takes care of everything else in the story.

With that said, let's get on with the story!

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I was terrified, lost and totally unprotected ... I didn't know what to do or how to return, what kind of place is this? It is clear that heaven is certainly not, I haven't seen much in my "short" life since I never had the opportunity to move too much from my position, any place outside my usual environment was already new to me ... It doesn't look like hell, at least from what I've been told about it... The only thing I could think about is the immense need I had to go home and how much I wanted to see God again, feeling alone in such a big world is so uncomfortable, even more so if I don't have someone to take care of me or protect me. Maybe it's because I'm used to being very dependent and I have never been able to fend for myself but I never really needed that, now that I find myself in this situation alone ... I begin to realize how important it is. Knowing how to move on your own, if only I could receive a ray of heavenly light that illuminated my way back, a simple signal that tells me how to return, is all I want, to get out of this strange place as quickly as possible and return next to my lord.

I started walking aimlessly and quite disoriented by the area where I had fallen, somehow I would have to start, right? If I stay still, I won't be able to find a way back and since it was the only option I had, I steeled myself to try. As I walked with a slightly stooped posture, clasping my hands and moving them restlessly while I bit my lower lip of the nerves, totally lost and without a fixed course, some beings passed right by me talking to each other, they didn't even flinch at the seeing me or rather I would say they didn't even see me, it's like I'm completely invisible ... Wait a minute, those weren't humans? If I remember correctly, I would say yes, I have never been but if they have told me about them, I understand that they cannot see us so that must be the reason why they won't have noticed that I am here ... So am I in the human world for real? I had no idea that it looked this way, maybe because I had another idea of ​​what it would look like but I really think it's not how I imagined it, maybe I had an idealized idea of ​​what this world looked like and giving myself account as it is really I feel somewhat disappointed, but perhaps I have only ended up in the worst place of the many that there must be, after all this site has been created by my lord so it can't be that bad, right? something created by him alone can be a good site. As I was walking through the narrow streets of the city, I decided to take a different path to get away from the crowds, the more I walked the more I got into the center and I don't like feeling so surrounded by people even if they don't see me, it's an overwhelming situation...          I went through one of the alleys between two large buildings, being an angel I didn't feel sorry because since they can't see me they can't do anything to me, or at least that's what I thought at all times until just when I had planned to turn the corner to take a different path ... I began to feel a different aura, the environment was denser and inspired little confidence, it is not the same feeling that humans transmit to me, I have the feeling as if I was entering in the mouth of the wolf and despite the fact that I want to turn around and run away I feel as if my body has become paralyzed ... I cannot move, fear has taken hold of me, what happens to me? Why can't   I turn around and go back the way I came? I feel like I'm cornered, it's a strange sensation that prevents me from running ... I sat on the ground leaning my back on the corner of the street trying to breathe calmly and slowly to control my nerves, no matter how difficult that was, I have to stay calm even if I can't. I decided to lean out very slowly, grabbing the edge of the corner and letting me see half of my face to see what was on the other side and what was that strange sensation that made me heavy to the point of feeling so much fear in my body. .. What my eyes saw at that moment, was something that I couldn't have imagined.