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No reality was dreamt of or at least that was what she believed. Not all conceits can be fancy. It is indeed a fact that no one could disagree. No ambitions came true with just a blink of an eye to the point that some tried to untangle the strings.
A story of not only two people is yet to unravel. The chords of fate chose to play with their lives' own rhythm. Kismet was said to be the thread to bind us all. Destiny preferred to ensare the chords among everyone. Will they eventually let the strings be a hindrance to be one another?
Parts: 18
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Title
•I like your title, it's unique and catchy.
Book cover
•I really love how you created the book cover. It's eye-catching for me.
Synopsis/Description
•I love your synopsis, but it's kinda confusing to me. It's better to keep your synopsis simple so that readers will be hooked by your story. If it's too deep and your readers can't understand it, eventually they will just ignore it. The simpler the synopsis/description, the better.
Characterization
•I love your characters. I found nothinh wrong with them.
Dialogue/Narration
•Kudos to you on how you carefully narrate the story. There's no mistake in the dialogue too.
Grammar/Sentence Structure
•Your sentence structure and grammar are good. Wala namang problema. Just be careful with your tenses.
•Always be careful with your paragraphs too, okay? Don't make it long in each chapter. Some reader will not read it because they will think that it's boring because it's a long paragraph. Just try to minimize it, that's all.
Advice/Suggestion
•Kudos to you! I really love how you write your story. I guess, you researched a lot to make your story better everyday.
My advice to you is to keep on improving in your work.
Kahit kaunti lang ang nakita ko na mga mali, pagsikapin mo paring matuto pa. Always improve every day, okay?
Don't be contented just because you only have small errors in your story.
Keep writing and continue improving co-author!
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