Any ideas or feedback?

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This is my first story and idk if it's sound good so far so whoever enjoys what I've written so far comment what you liked and suggest some things that'll make the story more interesting
Pls vote, it'll let me know it doesn't sound as shitty it does in my head.
  Also READ MY OTHER STORY

SING ME TO SLEEP

https://www.wattpad.com/story/41089232-sing-me-to-sleep

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