Criticism about my story

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I want for you readers to put any of your Criticisms of the story here and go all out with it if you have any negative or positive Criticism. This is for my readers, what story arc should I do next? As I am having trouble with thinking about it, give me some thoughts, since it's either the trychaser reveal and use or Pegasus form reveal.

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